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Any Friday At 6-30 Pm Prose-Poem

I'm playing seafaring games on the marble table, sketching between the blue striations of the stone, a slab that resembles an ocean to my young mind. I draw armadas and stick figure Spaniards, foes that fall into shark-infested waters. Cannons roar silently. Mum is at the sink drinking. Soon dad will be home, he will bring with him, two magazines; a ‘Woman's Own’ and the ‘T.V. Times’. He'll have a bottle of sherry for mum, a ‘Mars Bar’ and a Superman comic for me. Clock hands crawl nearer. It seems that the terraced house trembles, slightly at first, but gradually the shaking gets so I can hardly stay on the stool. I have to hold tight to the table. Oceans tip over. High waves slosh back and forth in my mind. My own stick-figure shudders, teeth chattering together. My mouth begins to mew like a seagull. Mum looks around, yells for me to stop - I can't it's 6.30 P.M. on any Friday, and for a while we all will be together in this one rocky boat. ~~

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Date: 12/5/2019 8:50:00 AM
I enjoyed your delightful poem, Eric.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 12/5/2019 10:37:00 AM
Thanks mucho Line!
Date: 12/5/2019 1:01:00 AM
This just took me straight back to my childhood, growing up in a town near a mining area, we had regular"tremors" and the whole house would shake. Loved comics too. I felt like I was watching a home movie...I enjoy reading your poems, Eric. Filled with well crafted images. "My mouth begins to mew like a seagull. Mum looks around, yells for me to stop." ( I might try the prose poem form- also couldn't find it in poem style list- had an idea in mind for a while.) Inspired. Warm regards ~~AquaM~~
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Eric Ashford
Date: 12/5/2019 10:39:00 AM
Interesting feedback and personal reflections Aqua. Yes do try the medium prose-poetry. Obliged to you.
Date: 12/4/2019 11:51:00 PM
My own stick-figure shudders, teeth chattering together. This was my fav line. I thought there was a lot of excellent imagery. All well written. Ann
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Eric Ashford
Date: 12/4/2019 11:56:00 PM
Thank you Ann, good to get feedback on this.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 12/4/2019 11:56:00 PM
Thank you Ann, good to get feedback on this.

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