Ant's Army

I stand and watch the exodus of ants
Through sig sag tracks, they wind their way
They march like disciplined soldiers
Never deterred by hurdles on their way

Are they fleeing from an imminent danger?
Or are they on their way to forage their daily bread
They move on urgency, no straggler on the way
Oh! With what collective energy they tread

It seems, these tiny insects lead an active communal life
Sometimes thousands of them scuttle on the ground
We wonder who summons them to gather as a group
Usually they keep in line with the ones going in front 

White ants build underground condominiums
As from castles, their spires tower above the ground
They are thus comfortably settled beneath 
In air conditioned compartments within the mound

Black ants occupy every creek and cranny
And live in unified colonies without strife
They are not fussy about where they stay
Any humble shelter is enough for their simple life

If by chance one gets hurt or wounded
The others generously carry it on their back
It is fun to watch them scurry on their tiny legs
And observe them move along, forming a neat track

Red ants are the miscreants of the whole lot
With mandibles like pliers, they pinch n pierce the skin
They might even crawl unseen to our beds
Leaving us itchy and scratchy making our heads spin

If the carcass of a rat or roach is found
In no time it is stripped down to the bone
If some grain is strewn on their way
In seconds each one carries and it is done

Unity is their strength, through precept they prove
They work together and live in harmony
They never rob another of his property
Nor like man covet his neighbor’s money!

15. Jan. 2022
Insect’s Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Angela Tune

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/16/2022 7:12:00 AM
Hi Valsa - first time reader - very impressed with your hugely informative poem. I am fascinated by ants, such industrious insects. I have written 2 poems last year about ants - DON'T MESS WITH ANTS, and, REVENGE OF THE ANTS. I hope your New Year will be filled with love and peace, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/16/2022 1:29:00 AM
I think it is in Australia that a human was eaten by ants. But it is a rare occasion. You describe the life of an ant very well. Best for a win.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/15/2022 8:19:00 PM
You certainly have thoroughly 'dissected' the ant here, Valsa! G.L. in the contest. ~ 'Bugs' Bunny. lol. :) Thanks, gw
Login to Reply
Date: 1/15/2022 5:10:00 PM
Vasla, Your ant story was entertaining. I gained some knowledge about ants. A well-considered verse. Blessings ~ Debra
Login to Reply
Date: 1/15/2022 12:35:00 PM
Valsa, you've written a wonderful poem. Indeed, ants have the rigor of an army, as well as highly-developed social intelligence, as shown by their own language and a strong sense of togetherness spirit, as you so eloquently portray in your vivid poem. Best wishes for a successful outcome.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/15/2022 12:15:00 PM
They have the discipline of an army and well developed communications skills, and superb community spirit--as you so expertly illustrate in this descriptive poem. Win BIG, Valsa.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/15/2022 10:40:00 AM
I stepped on an ant in Germany, and was surprised to see other ants immediately dash out, do a little dance around the deceased, ceremoniously pluck out its antennae, then haul off the carcass. I haven't stepped on an ant since then. Enjoyed your poem! Aloha!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/15/2022 9:02:00 AM
Indeed, my cup of tea. Nature heals, teaches by just be-ing. So erudite in last stanzas with comparisons to our species. In my worst moments, Nature's balm came. No questions
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter