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Another Time

The shepherd unrolls his bedding, Too late to get back home, He must lie, his head on desert rock, ‘Til the raising of the dawn. He wonders what he cannot see Behind the stars that shine above, Does his mother look down on him, With her old tenderness and love. Does the wind catch the sound of tambourines, Are there gauze-draped dancers twirling? Such were the dreams of a shepherd, Before the universe went swirling.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/16/2017 4:25:00 AM
Wow sunlite! This is amazing. The language and imagery are soulfully divine. Beautiful, just beautiful. a fave
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/16/2017 11:58:00 AM
Wow to you, too!!! And thank you for your comment and the fave.
Date: 9/8/2017 8:57:00 PM
gosh this is so "other worldly!!" I really love it, Sunlite!!
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Date: 9/9/2017 10:44:00 AM
I like that comment! Thank you.
Date: 9/6/2017 7:06:00 PM
Gorgeous gorgeous... I love it :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/9/2017 10:44:00 AM
Thank you, thank you!
Date: 9/6/2017 11:08:00 AM
Wow, loved this.. I like the language used and the flow to the poem... nice rhymes..
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/6/2017 6:19:00 PM
I treasure your comments, Silent One!
Date: 9/6/2017 4:23:00 AM
This is a fabulous write Sunlite! I surely enjoyed reading your illustrious poem this morning! You have definitely written a magnificent piece here! Great Work!!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/6/2017 9:55:00 AM
Thank you for such a glowing comment. You made my day!
Date: 9/5/2017 11:24:00 AM
A journey to another time well depicted SW!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/5/2017 12:44:00 PM
Thank you, kind sir.
Date: 9/5/2017 10:19:00 AM
I really enjoyed this Sunlite ! :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/5/2017 12:43:00 PM
I tried so hard to put a picture of one of my paintings with it, but didn't have the savvy, I guess, to do it.

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