Another Time

The shepherd unrolls his bedding,
Too late to get back home,
He must lie, his head on desert rock,
‘Til the raising of the dawn.

He wonders what he cannot see
Behind the stars that shine above,
Does his mother look down on him,
With her old tenderness and love.

Does the wind catch the sound of tambourines,
Are there gauze-draped dancers twirling?
Such were the dreams of a shepherd,
Before the universe went swirling.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marie Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 4:25 AM
Wow sunlite! This is amazing. The language and imagery are soulfully divine. Beautiful, just beautiful. a fave
Wanter Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 11:58 AM
Wow to you, too!!! And thank you for your comment and the fave.
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 8:57 PM
gosh this is so "other worldly!!" I really love it, Sunlite!!
Wanter Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 10:44 AM
I like that comment! Thank you.
Downing  Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 7:06 PM
Gorgeous gorgeous... I love it :)
Wanter Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 10:44 AM
Thank you, thank you!
One Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 11:08 AM
Wow, loved this.. I like the language used and the flow to the poem... nice rhymes..
Wanter Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 6:19 PM
I treasure your comments, Silent One!
Sivey Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 4:23 AM
This is a fabulous write Sunlite! I surely enjoyed reading your illustrious poem this morning! You have definitely written a magnificent piece here! Great Work!!
Wanter Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 9:55 AM
Thank you for such a glowing comment. You made my day!
Pandit Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 11:24 AM
A journey to another time well depicted SW!
Wanter Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 12:44 PM
Thank you, kind sir.
Sands Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 10:19 AM
I really enjoyed this Sunlite ! :)
Wanter Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 12:43 PM
I tried so hard to put a picture of one of my paintings with it, but didn't have the savvy, I guess, to do it.
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