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Another Chance

I speak my mind, but no one hears, in frustration, I feel the tears. It's much harder to calm my fears. As I look back at my past it appears, that sadly I've wasted the last few years. Can I start anew as tomorrow nears? Another chance to live, before all disappears.

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 8/3/2021 1:27:00 PM

Great monorhyme Sandra, a really nice pen with such good imagery too. Take care, Gordon

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 8/31/2021 6:06:00 AM

Thank you Gordon, so glad that you stopped by. I appreciate your generous comment.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/31/2021 1:53:00 PM

Ah, a really goo done, Sandra. I really enjoyed it, and I appreciate your fine ability to construct it.

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 8/1/2021 12:55:00 PM

Thank you Milton for your kind comment. Always appreciated.

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/31/2021 12:43:00 PM

Hi Sandra, Good monorhyme. I can relate to your somber write. I've had similar feelings such as these on many occasions. In my opinion, if one is blessed to see another day, you're allowed to live, the key is one must learn not to live in regret. I enjoyed the read. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 8/1/2021 12:54:00 PM

Thank you Alexis for your comment and input. You are right about living in regret, as a shadow within.