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April. 19. 2024
Pick a Title, Vol.43
Sponsor- Edward Ibeh

 

In a never sleeping metropolis, In the dungeon of a room, My days and nights are locked! I am a traveler on a street, with no end in sight, But just the bustle of the moving crowd, And a handful of burnt dreams for company My ‘kingdom’ is in the third floor, Of an old street building, Now languishing in neglect, Facing dilapidation, Just like my own life, In the chronic agony of existence! While the adjacent buildings, Renovated and restored Mine, under a bankrupt landlord, Is on the verge of instant collapse Looking through the chinks in the wall And craning my neck Over barricades of buildings Amid the swirl of traffic, I get a glimpse of the slum below In all its squalor and dirt, And a medley of lousy images Bleeding into one another like water colors. Now and then, I see, Beggars in bundled rags, Along cracked pavements. Some squatting, Some sleeping away to glory, With street dogs coming to share The leftovers in their begging bowls And lick their wounds! Sometimes I take away my glance From the dismembered corpses of the dead! On another side, In plush residential colonies, With landscaped courtyards, And cerulean swimming pools, Sentries stand on guard To admit 'Sahibs' Sliding in Mercedes and Rolls Royce! A little far, in the open balconies Of star hotels, Men toast goblets of wine! Oh! What stark divide! This grave imbalance is so contemptible. Woe to the society where there is widespread anomie!

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Date: 4/23/2024 5:06:00 PM
It is quite the contrast!
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Date: 4/23/2024 2:41:00 PM
Darn it! It looks like you forget to enter this poem in my contest, Valsa.:-( It would've placed at the very top. Brilliant!
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Date: 4/23/2024 9:58:00 PM
I checked it. It was entered. It has received a N/A. If you felt it could be placed, I wonder what has happened.
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Date: 4/23/2024 8:22:00 PM
Many a time it has happened. Sorry to have missed entering it in your contest. I have been a little too busy these days. Glad you rated it high. Thanks a lot, dear Edward.
Date: 4/20/2024 1:36:00 PM
It seems the whole world seems to be going to become two classes rich and poor. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 4/19/2024 9:52:00 AM
"I enjoyed reading your lovely poem on Anomie. Enjoy your day!!
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Date: 4/19/2024 9:44:00 AM
Dear Valsa, The stark contrasts between lavish settings and metropolitan degradation show how many people face the harrowing facts of life. Your lyrical descriptions of the constant misery of living in the midst of decay and abandonment were very moving to me. Creatively, your poetry highlights the disparities and inconsistencies in our society. An impassioned plea for change, this meditation will get you thinking. Good luck with the contest
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Date: 4/19/2024 5:37:00 AM
Dear Valsa, your poem artistically shows society's stark contrasts and inequalities. The scenes of urban decay juxtaposed with opulence reflect the harsh realities of life for many. I loved how your poetic words convey a sense of isolation and despair, highlighting the chronic agony of existence amidst dilapidation and neglect. What a great commentary on our society's grave imbalance and widespread anomie. This is a thought-provoking reflection—it's a call to action. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/19/2024 2:32:00 AM
Dear Valsa, I can well understand how you wrote this sad poem. Especially in your country (I compare it to Brazil too) I see the two facets of corrupt administration where the rich care not for the poor. Great metaphorical meanings. Best for a win.
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