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Anniversary Song

Tiny buds of green bursting open in the spring will drink up the golden sun ~ Each dawn when we wake I feel your arms around me and know the same warm embrace Even the seasons have contrived to turn the page without an apology ~ Falling from a tree with just a small whispered breath are all the years behind us

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/8/2011 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in ^Rick's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/8/2011 4:10:00 AM
Congratulations Lovely x
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Date: 12/7/2011 6:05:00 PM
The wine get better with age they tell me Carrie. I wouldn't know at 66, I've just began fermenting, how about you? Smile. Congratulations on your worthy poem Sis. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/7/2011 5:29:00 PM
such a lasting quality, so peaceful and dreamy! Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 11/26/2011 3:27:00 AM
Just wonderful Carrie!Love it.Best wishes.
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Date: 11/25/2011 6:17:00 PM
* "Like The Waters Crossing Boulders Within A Kiss Afore Flowing Unto A Tomorrows Eternal Sea * My Dear Gifted, Precious & Beautiful Carrie * Whom Can Voice Or Brush Its Beauties Greater Than You * Joy & Joy & Perfect Love * My Luv, Forever & Always * Sarah." *
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Date: 11/22/2011 8:56:00 PM
great idea to do it anniversary style. Those last few lines are stunning.
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Date: 11/22/2011 4:00:00 PM
Fantastic write Carrie! I love the comparison between Nature and Humans, especially the person you love the most! Great analogy, very good Sedoka!! Great Work!!
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Date: 11/22/2011 3:12:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Reads like a winning entry..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the comments on my blog..I appreciate you stopping by..Sara
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Date: 11/22/2011 2:57:00 PM
Smile, One Truth I Can Always Find Whileas Venturing Once More Unto Your Precious & Gifted Treasures Poetry, Beautiful Carrie * I Shall Forever Behold Something Uniquely Special * Pour Your Beauties Love Into Their Hearts * Smile, Such Beauty * My Luv Unto Always, John!:) *
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