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Anniversary of the First Love

Tonight invites us under the blue canopy of silver sky Driving away the obscurity of the normally sleepy eyes You stretch out your right hand like a golden bowl I lay my heart beats through my lips on your eyelashes The entwined flashes bring out the candles and the cups The spent fountains gushing out almost as they did The moons bloom to celebrate the love anniversary, ah June 22, 2018 For Seven lines of romantic heaven Poetry Contest Sponsored by : Silent One

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Date: 6/27/2018 8:12:00 PM
Back with Big Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/27/2018 9:47:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 6/25/2018 11:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this lovely romantic poem in 7 lines. Well done!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/27/2018 9:48:00 PM
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Date: 6/25/2018 6:53:00 AM
Lovely imagery Probir.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/25/2018 8:59:00 AM
Thank you, Silent for considering the poem for the placement ...
Date: 6/23/2018 6:35:00 PM
You are such a romantic. Loved the imagry of her right hand like a golden bowl!
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Date: 6/23/2018 11:46:00 PM
Nicely said, Andrea ... Thank you so much ...
Date: 6/22/2018 5:55:00 PM
This is so beautiful , Probir.. a winner and a fav.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/23/2018 12:15:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 6/22/2018 5:33:00 PM
probir, i'm a sucker for long-lasting love... marvelously done!... huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/23/2018 12:15:00 AM
Thank you, Nette ...
Date: 6/22/2018 3:08:00 PM
--ah, YES! 'the entwined flashes...the spent fountains' -- vividly real imagery here, Probir. Here's to a winner for you in the contest! ~ Gershon
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/23/2018 12:17:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon for the way you have expressed your appreciation of the imagery .

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