Anklets and Jasmine Incense

Embellished saris glide with hot winds
as the clatter of  bright anklets  varnish
female  heels rippling  on New Delhi's trails:
pungent waft of curry permeates
through a local mart —betel, cinnamon
and mint leaves flaunt their skin—
kohl for Oriental eyelids,  ambrosial herbs
rousing  elder men-- while a bowl of lentils
incite my buds. 

Although the thick of  dust settles mid-air,
Delhi’s  evening of jasmines reflects
a holy incense sanctifying  a mystical chant
quiet , ethereal as I adorn myself
with a comfortable  sari and layered  bangles ,
gazing at Taj Mahal, if only to imbibe
this calm energy unfamiliar yet known
inside my core… my breath follows
Hindi prayers of wonderment
on and on like a song of moonlight,
until I accept   allow such deep belonging
through the city’s rhythm with the world 

and somehow, intimately mine.


Exotic Contest for Debbie Guzzi
7/20/2017
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Gauthier Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 5:30 PM
What a beautiful poems, taking us through the aromatic streets of India. Wonderful treat for the senses. Thank you so much for sharing. Love your poem.
Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 6:00 PM
So gorgeous, Nette. Maybe one day I will be able to go there. (wishful thinking) BIG congrats.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 3:13 AM
I would to visit India one day Nette, but until I can you have just taken me there with your wonderful poem! Congratulations on your Second placement! : )
Barden Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 4:56 PM
I love this so much, Nette! I just wrote a poem about an experience in India, but the areas of Jaipur, Mumbai, and the Arabian Sea Coast. This is sublimely-penned and perfectly-phrased, and a deserved placement - congrats!! You're such a talented writer, my friend! <3
Callus Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 8:49 AM
The title drew me in, and I am pleased I chose this one to read, Nette! India is one country that is still not ticked on my wish list, and your beautiful exotic poem adds to the desire. I notice that this is a winning entry, so...Congratulations! Hugs // paul
Carmack Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 8:28 AM
Congrats Nette!
Lane Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 6:29 AM
You've written a great piece on a very exotic corner of the world, Congrtulations, nette.
Guzzi Avatar
July 22, 2017 at 8:39 PM
nette, I loved how personal this verse felt. Thank you for your entry. Please do enter my next contest. Congrad's Light & Love Debbie
Allison Avatar
July 22, 2017 at 7:41 PM
many congrats on your win Nette:-) hugs jan xx
Daniel Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 5:42 AM
Wow, Nette, you make India sound so beautiful, loved this:)
Conte Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 8:42 AM
Exquisitely done. The way you painted the atmosphere of this place makes me put it in my bucket list!
Warrior Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 11:06 PM
How exotic is that...nette onclaud style lol...^WW^
Turner Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 5:46 PM
You can pass me a bowl of those lentils, nette. A spiritual awakening but in your own classic style. Wonderful:) I have always wanted to see the Taj Majal from the back of an elephant, no less.
Parker Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 5:13 PM
wow, my friend a very deep spiritual moment you give life to such an ancient land
Roper Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 4:21 PM
I love the title, Nette, it really attracted me to your verse. Your verse is enchanting with the scent of herbs . A winner already :) ~*
Datu Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 3:26 PM
I am lured by the mystery of this fascinating poem through an unusual " song of moonlight, calm energy unfamiliar yet known." You are tops!
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 3:13 PM
- A wonderful fragrant poem, Nette :) - Good luck in the contest - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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