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Anklets and Jasmine Incense

Embellished saris glide with hot winds as the clatter of bright anklets varnish female heels rippling on New Delhi's trails: pungent waft of curry permeates through a local mart —betel, cinnamon and mint leaves flaunt their skin— kohl for Oriental eyelids, ambrosial herbs rousing elder men-- while a bowl of lentils incite my buds. Although the thick of dust settles mid-air, Delhi’s evening of jasmines reflects a holy incense sanctifying a mystical chant quiet , ethereal as I adorn myself with a comfortable sari and layered bangles , gazing at Taj Mahal, if only to imbibe this calm energy unfamiliar yet known inside my core… my breath follows Hindi prayers of wonderment on and on like a song of moonlight, until I accept allow such deep belonging through the city’s rhythm with the world and somehow, intimately mine. Exotic Contest for Debbie Guzzi 7/20/2017

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Date: 8/27/2017 5:30:00 PM
What a beautiful poems, taking us through the aromatic streets of India. Wonderful treat for the senses. Thank you so much for sharing. Love your poem.
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Date: 7/25/2017 6:00:00 PM
So gorgeous, Nette. Maybe one day I will be able to go there. (wishful thinking) BIG congrats.
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Date: 7/24/2017 3:13:00 AM
I would to visit India one day Nette, but until I can you have just taken me there with your wonderful poem! Congratulations on your Second placement! : )
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Date: 7/23/2017 4:56:00 PM
I love this so much, Nette! I just wrote a poem about an experience in India, but the areas of Jaipur, Mumbai, and the Arabian Sea Coast. This is sublimely-penned and perfectly-phrased, and a deserved placement - congrats!! You're such a talented writer, my friend! <3
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Date: 7/23/2017 8:49:00 AM
The title drew me in, and I am pleased I chose this one to read, Nette! India is one country that is still not ticked on my wish list, and your beautiful exotic poem adds to the desire. I notice that this is a winning entry, so...Congratulations! Hugs // paul
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Date: 7/23/2017 8:28:00 AM
Congrats Nette!
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Date: 7/23/2017 6:29:00 AM
You've written a great piece on a very exotic corner of the world, Congrtulations, nette.
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Date: 7/22/2017 8:39:00 PM
nette, I loved how personal this verse felt. Thank you for your entry. Please do enter my next contest. Congrad's Light & Love Debbie
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Date: 7/22/2017 7:41:00 PM
many congrats on your win Nette:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/21/2017 5:42:00 AM
Wow, Nette, you make India sound so beautiful, loved this:)
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Date: 7/20/2017 8:42:00 AM
Exquisitely done. The way you painted the atmosphere of this place makes me put it in my bucket list!
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Date: 7/19/2017 11:06:00 PM
How exotic is that...nette onclaud style lol...^WW^
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Date: 7/19/2017 5:46:00 PM
You can pass me a bowl of those lentils, nette. A spiritual awakening but in your own classic style. Wonderful:) I have always wanted to see the Taj Majal from the back of an elephant, no less.
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Date: 7/19/2017 5:13:00 PM
wow, my friend a very deep spiritual moment you give life to such an ancient land
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Date: 7/19/2017 4:21:00 PM
I love the title, Nette, it really attracted me to your verse. Your verse is enchanting with the scent of herbs . A winner already :) ~*
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Date: 7/19/2017 3:26:00 PM
I am lured by the mystery of this fascinating poem through an unusual " song of moonlight, calm energy unfamiliar yet known." You are tops!
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Date: 7/19/2017 3:13:00 PM
- A wonderful fragrant poem, Nette :) - Good luck in the contest - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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