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One ticket admission to my home z o o! SO many creatures, don’t know what to do- a turtle and a bunny, a stinky pug so funny, a Golden Retriever who lost a s c r e w! The bunny likes smelling the dog’s behinds, too bad he will NEVER know what he’ll find! a grossly dingle-berry, something hairy and scary, “GO find a carrot you’re way out of line!” The pug snuffles and snorts through out the night, then I’m yawning while I’m struggling to write- the turtle has a long neck, I’m always like, “WHAT THE HECK?” then he basks while choking on a termite! You may think my family is distressed, and maybe we NEVER get any rest- a million bucks I won’t take, we have a bond that WON'T break, we do love our z o o that’s quite picturesque! Syllable Count: 10-10-7-7-10 Animal Antics Contest Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton Dedicated to my beautiful zoo: Bo-my sweet Golden Retriever age 11 (dying of cancer :(....) Mugsy-my stinky Pug age 12 Lucky-my white fluffy bunny age 3 Pebbles-my long-necked turtle age 2 Date Written: August 18, 2016

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Date: 9/28/2016 10:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/23/2016 5:49:00 PM
Awesome poem. Love it. A true animal lover. Congrats.
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Date: 9/20/2016 2:30:00 AM
Lovely poem..You have a beautiful pet Family... Congratulations on your well deserved win....
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Date: 9/19/2016 5:24:00 PM
Your Animal Antic Poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara ..The zoos have it..
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Date: 9/19/2016 12:58:00 PM
Awesome write !
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Date: 9/18/2016 11:13:00 PM
A 7 for this TOP-winning poem, Luloo! Janice
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Laura Loo
Date: 9/19/2016 6:38:00 AM
thank you sweet Janice :)-luloo
Date: 9/18/2016 9:17:00 PM
this is fabulous, Laura, I'll come by tomorrow for a visit. Congratulations on your 1st place win very well deserved. Hugs
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Laura Loo
Date: 9/19/2016 6:37:00 AM
you're welcome to visit anytime lovely Eve :) be aware of the frisky fluffy bunny, he can be naughty...lol thank you :)-luloo
Date: 9/18/2016 4:00:00 PM
Love your poem and your lovely pet family, Laura! Congratulations on your Trophy First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Laura Loo
Date: 9/18/2016 4:30:00 PM
thank you sweet Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 9/18/2016 3:45:00 PM
Just make sure they don't multiply. LOL Lovely poem about a lovely family. Congratulations on your win.
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Laura Loo
Date: 9/18/2016 3:57:00 PM
thank you lovely Janice :)-luloo
Date: 9/5/2016 8:44:00 AM
lovely to read this again LuLoo good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/6/2016 5:20:00 PM
thank you lovely Jan :)-luloo
Date: 8/19/2016 6:07:00 AM
Wow!!! So many pets:) Such a lovely write:) Sorry for Bo...our pet Blackie died recently, but it was a natural death..she was just 10:(
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Laura Loo
Date: 8/19/2016 8:41:00 AM
oh no Jo, I'm sorry..I feel like 10 is young for a natural death, but then again I was told pugs don't live past 10 and he is 12. You poor thing, I hate hearing that sad stuff. I hope I didn't upset you....be blessed -luloo
Date: 8/19/2016 1:36:00 AM
this is SO SO cute. I love animal poems! And it was funny as well, about the bunny. This is like my dang dog, always gong to the cat's litter box. Despicable! I wish I could enlarge the pic of your gold dog. I thought those were puppies around her body but I think they are stuffed animals. sorry about your dog. My best cat I ever owned died of cancer years ago. She lived a very good 18 years.
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Laura Loo
Date: 8/19/2016 8:40:00 AM
thanks Andrea, yeah the pic is of Mugs surrounded by stuffed animal pugs and Bo surrounded by stuffed animal Golden Retrievers. Ella's idea of course! :)-luloo
Date: 8/19/2016 12:11:00 AM
This is so precious, Laura Loo! I wouldn't change a thing:)
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Laura Loo
Date: 8/19/2016 8:38:00 AM
Thank you lovely Laura :)-luloo
Date: 8/18/2016 2:17:00 PM
Get a couple gators and you could charge admission...wonderful limericks
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Laura Loo
Date: 8/18/2016 4:53:00 PM
lol! Thanks Tim :)-luloo
Date: 8/18/2016 2:10:00 PM
aww what charming pictures and lovely limericks LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
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Laura Loo
Date: 8/18/2016 3:26:00 PM
thanks Jan, those are my baby boys...Ella and I are way outnumbered in out house lol :)-luloo