Premiere Contest WinnerAnimal Antics

One ticket admission to my home z o o! SO many creatures, don’t know what to do- a turtle and a bunny, a stinky pug so funny, a Golden Retriever who lost a s c r e w! The bunny likes smelling the dog’s behinds, too bad he will NEVER know what he’ll find! a grossly dingle-berry, something hairy and scary, “GO find a carrot you’re way out of line!” The pug snuffles and snorts through out the night, then I’m yawning while I’m struggling to write- the turtle has a long neck, I’m always like, “WHAT THE HECK?” then he basks while choking on a termite! You may think my family is distressed, and maybe we NEVER get any rest- a million bucks I won’t take, we have a bond that WON'T break, we do love our z o o that’s quite picturesque! Syllable Count: 10-10-7-7-10 Animal Antics Contest Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton Dedicated to my beautiful zoo: Bo-my sweet Golden Retriever age 11 (dying of cancer :(....) Mugsy-my stinky Pug age 12 Lucky-my white fluffy bunny age 3 Pebbles-my long-necked turtle age 2 Date Written: August 18, 2016
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Milliner Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 10:46 PM
Congrats on your win!
Steele Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 5:49 PM
Awesome poem. Love it. A true animal lover. Congrats.
Kannan Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 2:30 AM
Lovely poem..You have a beautiful pet Family... Congratulations on your well deserved win....
Kendrick Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 5:24 PM
Your Animal Antic Poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara ..The zoos have it..
Troutman Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 12:58 PM
Awesome write !
Canerdy Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 11:13 PM
A 7 for this TOP-winning poem, Luloo! Janice
Scars Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 6:38 AM
thank you sweet Janice :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 9:17 PM
this is fabulous, Laura, I'll come by tomorrow for a visit. Congratulations on your 1st place win very well deserved. Hugs
Scars Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 6:37 AM
you're welcome to visit anytime lovely Eve :) be aware of the frisky fluffy bunny, he can be naughty...lol thank you :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 4:00 PM
Love your poem and your lovely pet family, Laura! Congratulations on your Trophy First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 4:30 PM
thank you sweet Sandra :)-luloo
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 3:45 PM
Just make sure they don't multiply. LOL Lovely poem about a lovely family. Congratulations on your win.
Scars Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 3:57 PM
thank you lovely Janice :)-luloo
Allison Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 8:44 AM
lovely to read this again LuLoo good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Scars Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 5:20 PM
thank you lovely Jan :)-luloo
Daniel Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 6:07 AM
Wow!!! So many pets:) Such a lovely write:) Sorry for Bo...our pet Blackie died recently, but it was a natural death..she was just 10:(
Scars Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 8:41 AM
oh no Jo, I'm sorry..I feel like 10 is young for a natural death, but then again I was told pugs don't live past 10 and he is 12. You poor thing, I hate hearing that sad stuff. I hope I didn't upset you....be blessed -luloo
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August 19, 2016 at 1:36 AM
this is SO SO cute. I love animal poems! And it was funny as well, about the bunny. This is like my dang dog, always gong to the cat's litter box. Despicable! I wish I could enlarge the pic of your gold dog. I thought those were puppies around her body but I think they are stuffed animals. sorry about your dog. My best cat I ever owned died of cancer years ago. She lived a very good 18 years.
Scars Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 8:40 AM
thanks Andrea, yeah the pic is of Mugs surrounded by stuffed animal pugs and Bo surrounded by stuffed animal Golden Retrievers. Ella's idea of course! :)-luloo
Leiser Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 12:11 AM
This is so precious, Laura Loo! I wouldn't change a thing:)
Scars Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 8:38 AM
Thank you lovely Laura :)-luloo
Smith Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Get a couple gators and you could charge admission...wonderful limericks
Scars Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 4:53 PM
lol! Thanks Tim :)-luloo
Allison Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 2:10 PM
aww what charming pictures and lovely limericks LuLoo:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 3:26 PM
thanks Jan, those are my baby boys...Ella and I are way outnumbered in out house lol :)-luloo
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