Paula Goldsmith Poet Free verse

Angie

I always had Angie Under My Thumb,
one day I heard her honking her car horn.
What had she just done with her anger,
my candy apple red vette she did Paint It Black.
She was yelling back at me,
You Can't Always Get What You Want.
Now I will Tumblin Dice for release,
my new car is a big mess.
Her blue Mustang car playing The Rolling Stones,
a car of Wild Horses sped off in a flash.
No more Honky Tonk Women for me,
guess I will go back to my old friend Ruby Tuesday.

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Joseph May July 20, 2025 at 4:29 PM Congrats on your win Paula, Very nicely penned Paula Goldsmith July 21, 2025 at 9:19 AM Thank You for coming over to read and write on my "Angie" page. Also thanks for your Congratulations. Glad you found my fun write/story to be, Very nicely penned. I really enjoyed writing this fun story. Have a fun day with music as you go writing away........

Oliver Mckeithan July 19, 2025 at 3:15 PM Congrats in your placement in my contest Paula. Like that your red vette was now painted black. Sometimes the old standbys are better than the new wild ones. Paula Goldsmith July 20, 2025 at 9:57 AM Thank You for coming over to read and write on my "Angie" page. Also thanks for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun write/story. I really enjoyed writing for this great/fun contest. Thanks for having it and for my placement. You made my day a happy one. Have a fun day with music as you go writing away........

Len Gasun June 28, 2025 at 3:48 AM Creatively and brilliantly crafted poem. Another poem I extremely enjoyed. Thanks a lot for sharing your great talent with us. More blessings and power. Good luck always my dear poet friend Paula. Hugs Paula Goldsmith June 28, 2025 at 11:29 AM Thank You for coming over to read and write on my "Angie" page. Also thanks for your Good luck. Glad you found this to be a, Creatively and brilliantly crafted poem. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun write/story. Have a fun day with music as you go writing away............

Emilia James June 27, 2025 at 1:33 PM Very nicely done Paula. I enjoyed your poem and good luck in the contest. Emilia : ) Paula Goldsmith June 28, 2025 at 11:26 AM Thank You for coming over to read and write on my "Angie" page. Also thanks for your good luck in the contest. Glad you found this to be, Very nicely done. So glad you enjoyed reading. It was so much fun to write and tell this story. Have a fun day with music as you go writing away............

Evelyn Judy Buehler June 25, 2025 at 5:32 PM This is super, Paula! I toroughly enjoyed reading this fun poem. Best wishes for the contest. Paula Goldsmith June 26, 2025 at 8:10 AM Thank You for coming over to read and write on my "Angie" page. Also thanks for your Best wishes for the contest. Glad you found this to be, super. It was a ton of fun to write this story. Have a fun day with music as you go writing away............

Bj Legros Kelley June 25, 2025 at 1:05 AM Wow Paula, this was great! I saw all those songs and now see it is for a contest :) Paula Goldsmith June 25, 2025 at 10:54 AM Thank You for coming over to read and write on my "Angie" page. Glad you found this to be, great. It was a ton of fun to write. Have a fun day with music as you go writing away............

Anne-Lise Andresen June 23, 2025 at 6:56 AM - Creativity and funny writing, Paula ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Paula Goldsmith June 23, 2025 at 1:46 PM Thank You for coming over to read and write on my "Angie" page. Also thanks for your best wishes in the contest. Glad you found this to be, Creativity and funny writing. It was so much fun to bring this story to life. Hugs... Have a fun day with music as you go writing away............

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2025 at 10:45 PM Cute job. I will post mine sometime this week. My daughter is Angela but we call her Angie! Paula Goldsmith June 23, 2025 at 1:42 PM Thank You for coming over to read and write on my "Angie" page. Glad you found this to be a, Cute job. It was so much fun to bring to life. Angela is a petty name. I have a friend with that name. Have a fun day with music as you go writing away............

I Am Anaya June 22, 2025 at 10:31 PM Cleverly done, nice job! Bol Paula Goldsmith June 23, 2025 at 1:40 PM Thank You for coming over to read and write on my "Angie" page. Glad you found this to be, Cleverly done. It was a fun story to bring to life. Have a fun day with music as you go writing away............

Kim Rodrigues June 22, 2025 at 8:07 PM Great! Love the last line! Paula Goldsmith June 23, 2025 at 1:39 PM Thank You for coming over to read and write on my "Angie" page. Glad you found this to be, Great. It was a ton of fun to write. Have a fun day with music as you go writing away............

Heidi Sands June 22, 2025 at 1:06 PM Very creative, fun poem. Put together well. Well done Paula! :) Paula Goldsmith June 23, 2025 at 1:37 PM Thank You for coming over to read and write on my "Angie" page. Glad you found this to be, Very creative, fun poem. Thanks for your kind words. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a fun day with music as you go writing away............

Paula Goldsmith June 22, 2025 at 11:40 AM Angie ~ Date Written:6/22/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet.........