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Anger's Betrayal

My vile tongue betrays me, rage defiles words. A dragon’s flamed breath scorches far less. From buried heartache, my ill soul’s duress festers in mourning, locked tight and unheard. Skies of ash smolder and silence the birds. Their lyrics once earnest are lies professed. Oh, dawn vengeful dawn, my foe to confess! I’ll die with my rage, alone, I’m assured. I wonder if death shall be my relief from hours overwrought by lies and deceit. My inner-rage boils, calloused is my soul; a soul void of love and cloaked in its grief. As chill of death comes to snuff rage's heat, I pray for the love and peace, anger stole. written 11/20/15 for John's Mad As A Hornet Contest *Italian Sonnet - rhyme scheme abbaabba cdecde

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Date: 12/2/2015 11:30:00 PM
Rhonda Congrats on your win, SKAT
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Date: 12/2/2015 7:43:00 PM
...Hey, Rhoda, I love (and sometimes live) that last line. Well Done...thanks for entering the hornet's nest.
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Date: 12/2/2015 7:53:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful Italian Sonnet Rhonda!
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Date: 12/1/2015 10:22:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb win with this wonderful sonnet Rhonda!
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Date: 11/21/2015 12:03:00 AM
I liked the "Skies of ash smolder and silence the birds" and really liked "As chill of death comes to snuff rage's heat" Good luck. Great sonnet!
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