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Angels Mourn For You

The ANGELS danced the day you were born, since your death, all they do is MOURN. spiritual apathy is my life if only I could find peace maybe my heart would heal. I need not days that bring anymore woe, yet moments where my m i s e r y finds ease- Time has passed, and I need to let go, oh God, I b e g and p l e a d for this anguish to cease. I never knew pain until I lost my sweet boy despair fills my soul- they rejoiced in elation now the ANGELS MOURN for you It's All About Four Poetry Contest Sponsor, Broken Wings April 1, 2018

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Date: 5/1/2018 8:30:00 PM
Beautiful, Laura, {:~) congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/29/2018 5:55:00 PM
Laura, a very good use of your title in that final line of the tanka. A sad and emotive poem. Congratulations for your win.
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Date: 4/29/2018 4:41:00 PM
So sad, but so well-written, Laura. Congratulations on your 1st Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/29/2018 1:18:00 PM
No one can wipe away the pain of losing a child. Congrats, Luloo!
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Date: 4/29/2018 8:40:00 AM
Laura, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem, so emotional and touching, and heartbreaking. I like your layout a lot. Well done.
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Date: 4/29/2018 7:44:00 AM
I don't know if I'm going to make it through all of these poems. They are all so beautifully sad, as is yours.
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Date: 4/29/2018 1:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. Such a somber tone that touches the heart. Well done.
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Date: 4/29/2018 1:03:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your win. How sadly sadness flows in your poem
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Date: 4/28/2018 10:25:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Laura, with this emotional write.
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