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Angel's Christmas Wish

There was a little girl named Angel. Who had such a beautiful spirit and was cute as she could be. Angel had a heart of gold, everytime she could help someone in need she would. The sisters in the orphanage loved the child so much. They prayed daily that their little "Angel" would get a loving home. But until then they vowed to show her how much she was loved. One day Sister Sarah saw little Angel was sad. "What's wrong child? Why are you sad? "Christmas is coming soon and you know I love you and the other Sisters and the other children".With tears in her big brown eyes she continued. " I want to be adopted. I want a mommy and daddy for christmas." "Please don't cry child. I know you want that child. I want that for you as well. But in the meantime remember that we all love you here.You a very special little girl. Come, let's you get you cleaned up couples are visiting us today." Angel began to wipe her face and a small smile appeared her sweet face." Oh boy, maybe my christmas wish will come true after all." Run along child." As soon as the child left the room. Sister Sarah wept and and prayed that the precious child would not only get a home, but a loving home with loving parents that would love her as their own flesh and blood. Later on that evening several young couples came in with adoption on their minds. Some were looking for a specific gender, some were looking for babies and some wanted school age children. Little "Angel was six and a half. She wasn't a baby and she wasn't what you call big either, she was somewhere in between. A sweet young couple came in and they said they wanted a girl between 5 and six. Mother Rose thought of "Angel" instantly . However the most astonishing thing was sweet "Angel" bore a striking resemblance to the young mother. She pondered the thought could this be the child's mother? But then thought quickly it was just a mere coincidence. " Hello Sir and Mam, I think I have the child for you. Her name is "Angel" and she is six years old. Would you like to meet her? " And unison they both said"Yes". Moments later Mother Rose returned with the child. And Mary Williams almost fainted. in her chair. For it was like looking at a miniature version of herself. Instantly she went down memory lane she was 17 years old when she got pregnant by her childhood boyfriend. They were young and inlove, they had their whole lives ahead them. That all changed when she got pregnant. He wasn't ready to be a father and he insisted she abort the child. She couldn't and they broke up month later. Her parents were disappointed and ashamed of her. They sent her to a home for unwed mothers to be.She stayed their for her entire pregnancy .She gave birth and never saw her little girl again."Honey are you okay?" Her husband asked lovingly. "I'm fine dear. That is the child I want. If she will have us. Little "Angel and Mother Rose were as happy as can be." "Yes mam I would like that very much. I always wanted. my very own mommy and daddy." She turned to Mother Rose and began to cry because she loved the old lady very much. The nuns and the other children in the orphanage were the only family she knew. As they said their goodbyes she left as she was. She didn't want any of her things, she gave the little things she had to her closest friends to remember her by. When they arrived home "Angel" couldn't believe her eyes. She thought to herself is mommy and daddy rich? Meanwhile Mary Williams looked in her husband in the eyes and said" Sweetheart I think that's my baby in there.I don't want to get my hopes up (because she's mine no matter what) . But honey wouldn't that be a miracle if we found my baby girl?" "You mean wouldn't that be a miracle if we found our baby girl?" TO BE CONTINUED 12-10-16 Alexis Y.

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Date: 3/4/2017 5:26:00 AM
This was such a beautiful story. I love a story with a happy ending and you certainly gave us that. So well written
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Date: 12/13/2016 7:20:00 PM
WOW WOW WOW Alexis this is magnificent story telling I am on the edge of my seat waiting to read part 2. I think it should have been POTW!!!!!! many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Date: 12/12/2016 8:40:00 PM
Brought a tear to my eye! well maybe more than one! so lovely this!
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Date: 12/13/2016 8:05:00 PM
Hi Arthur, Thank you so much much for such an awesome comment. It really makes me feel to hear that something I wrote had that affect on you. It caused me to tear up too and I wrote it . I appreciate that you stopped by :-).Alexis
Date: 12/12/2016 4:16:00 PM
I'm so glad I ran across this lovely little story, Alexis. Just beautiful so far. Anxious for the next chapter. Carole
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Date: 12/12/2016 12:21:00 PM
OTAY! Triple wowsas! It takes a bit to get a tear shed onto this old man's cheek, but you've done it. Looking forward to the next chapter! huggarooniebeans ~ john
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Date: 12/12/2016 2:51:00 PM
WoW! John, thank you so much for such an awesome comment. It's good to hear that someone is moved or touched by something I wrote. I had tears in my eyes too and I wrote it. The next installment is coming soon.I appreciate that you came by today:-) Alexis
Date: 12/12/2016 12:18:00 PM
This is such an amazing, heartwarming story, Alexis...can't wait for the "to be continued." Congratulations on your well-deserved honor of "Poem Of The Day." Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/12/2016 2:44:00 PM
Hi Sandra, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you came by to congratulate me for getting the poem of the day: -) Alexis
Date: 12/12/2016 11:56:00 AM
Looking forward to the next part, Alexis, wonderful poem. For me very special because I now for the first time have a real home too :)
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Date: 12/12/2016 12:02:00 PM
Hi Darren, Thank you so much. I'm happy to hear that you have found a home. I appreciate that you came by to congratulate me for getting the poem of the day:-) Alexis
Date: 12/12/2016 10:11:00 AM
Looking forward to "continued." So lovely and perfect for the season.
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Date: 12/12/2016 12:06:00 PM
Hi Sunlite, Thank you so much. I'm contemplating whether I should make part two. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis
Date: 12/12/2016 8:28:00 AM
I was correct it is wonderful, actually more than wonderful. This one tugs at the heart strings and brings a feeling of happiness and love as I read it today. This is definitely deserving of the poem of the day and should be poem of the year. This was absolutely beautiful and I love when dreams come true, especially a child's dreams but I guess in this case, the mother's dreams have come true as well. This poem is so you Alexis. Your heart shines in these thoughts and words.
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Date: 12/12/2016 8:42:00 AM
WoW! Chris, thanks for such a awesome comment. Poem of the year? This write is dear to my heart and it brought tears to my eyes and I wrote it. It makes me when someone makes a connection with something I wrote. Thanks for coming by to congratulate me for getting the poem of day:-) Alexis PS, you just got comment of the day by the way.
Date: 12/12/2016 8:08:00 AM
Well done and congratulations for POTD honors...
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Date: 12/12/2016 8:17:00 AM
Hi Charlie, Thanks for coming by to congratulate me for getting the poem of the day. :-) Alexis
Date: 12/12/2016 6:37:00 AM
Wether it's a real story or not, it brought tears to my eyes. What a beautiful heartwarming story. Best wishes and congrats, it well deserve to be the poem of the day. Hugs :)
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Date: 12/12/2016 7:33:00 AM
Hi Akkina, No It's not my story, however this is a true story for so many family around the world. I appreciate you taking the time to read this lengthy story. It brought tears to my eyes and I penned it. Thanks for coming by to congratulate me for getting the poem of the day: -) Alexis
Date: 12/12/2016 6:29:00 AM
congrats on POTD, Alexis.
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Date: 12/12/2016 7:29:00 AM
Hi Agnes, Thanks for coming by to congratulate me for getting the poem of the day:-) Alexis
Date: 12/12/2016 3:28:00 AM
- A wonderful story, Alexis ... touches my heart - Congratulations p.o.t.d. !!! - A BIG 7 !!! - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/12/2016 7:27:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, I got poem of the day? Thanks for bringing such good news:-) Alexis
Date: 12/12/2016 2:01:00 AM
I don't celebrate Xmas. But what a tearjerker story. Poor little girl. Very well written. You are an amazing talent. The sad thing is, such stories I'm sure are true. Best wishes. Pete.
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Date: 12/12/2016 8:51:00 AM
Hi Peter, I appreciate that you took time to read this lengthy poem. Especially since you don't celebrate "Christmas" . It caused me to tear up too and I wrote it. I'm glad you stopped by my friend: -) Alexis
Date: 12/11/2016 4:21:00 PM
The sad longing, the hopeful heart, the unpredictable visit, and the wish coming to fruition are so palpable to me Alexis, because your poetry relays such genuine feeling, its poignant, painful, and beautiful. I'm a little teary from this...J.A.B.
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Date: 12/11/2016 5:17:00 PM
Hi Justin, Thank you so much for that wonderful comment. This poem got to me too and I penned it. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis
Date: 12/11/2016 2:01:00 PM
Hi Alexis: A beautiful heartfelt story of a mom finding her long lost daughter as if it were prophetic!
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Date: 12/11/2016 2:09:00 PM
Hi Ralph, Thanks for such a great comment. I appreciate you taking the time to read this lengthy poem: -) Alexis
Date: 12/11/2016 12:40:00 PM
wow, that is a GREAT twist, Alexis. I just know she is the woman's own child! It would make a great Xmas movie!! I don't know what you would continue with this one. I think it stands alone as a finished product!
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Date: 12/11/2016 12:44:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Thanks for that awesome comment. I see your point. I may just leave it as is. I appreciate you taking the time to read this lengthy poem. Thanks for stopping by: -) Alexis
Date: 12/11/2016 12:34:00 PM
I totally agree with Mystic. It's a very moving narration. A 7.
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Date: 12/11/2016 12:39:00 PM
Hi Afzal, Thank you so much. I appreciate you taking the time to read this lengthy poem. Thanks for the 7 and the visit:-) Alexis
Date: 12/10/2016 6:06:00 PM
I am excited to go on and read your ending. This is very well written and a joy to read Alexis. 7 ; )
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Date: 12/11/2016 12:18:00 PM
Hi Connie, Thank you so much.I'm glad you liked it. I appreciate you taking the to read this lengthy poem. Thanks for the high mark and the visit: -) Alexis
Date: 12/10/2016 5:19:00 PM
I agree w/Paloma. This is a Christmas miracle story, Alexis. You spun this beautiful tale very well. A holiday 7+, my dear. Can't wait to hear the rest of it. Btw, coincidentally, I have a niece named Angel (her real name is Ruth) but she's been called Angel since she was a little girl. Anywho ... loved the poem. I love Christmas stories, they're the best. Love and joy to you.
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Date: 12/10/2016 5:38:00 PM
Hi Freddie, Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. I know it's extremely long but It's what my muse compelled me to write. Thanks for the visit and the seven. I appreciate your continued support my friend. :-) Alexis
Date: 12/10/2016 11:56:00 AM
Beautiful, Alexis. This is such a fantastically wonderful Christmas story and I can't wait to read the continuation. I am going to print this out and show it to friends and loved ones. So well written I could feel the love of God surrounding Sister Sarah and Angel and a joy that brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to feel that emotion and joy. Great story, my friend..... Robert
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Date: 12/10/2016 12:14:00 PM
WoW! Thank you Robert, for such a wonderful comment. It makes me happy that you connected with something I wrote. I'm honored that you want to print it out and show it others. Such a gesture just warms my heart. I appreciate that you stopped by today my friend :-) Alexis
Date: 12/10/2016 10:29:00 AM
This gave me chills Alexis, a Christmas miracle, dreams really do come true, waiting on part two. :)
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Date: 12/10/2016 10:55:00 AM
It was a wee bit lengthy but kept my interest til the end. My pleasure. :)
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Date: 12/10/2016 10:44:00 AM
Hi Paloma, I agree dreams do come true. Thank you so much for the kind comment and visit. I know this piece is extremely long but it's where my muse led me this morning. I appreciate you being the first to comment:-)Alexis

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