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Angels

Tragic is the sound of a once beautiful voice made sad Anguished cries from the pain of a self-abusive, hurtful life So many sores on your hands and knees, you do always seem to be falling Falling down ... falling Getting up gets harder each time, losing more pieces of your mind ... broken fragments And the suffering doesn’t seem to have an end Death’s sirens you hear calling Your soul is like an angel falling, plummeting to the ground Falling down ... falling Your sad soul is like a fallen angel, who fell to the ground No more shine on your broken halo, fallen angel As your soul keeps falling further down Every time you fall to the ground, a piece of your heart gets shattered Losing another fragment of your mind each time Broken heart ... broken halo The ground opens apart for the last fall of a fallen angel 9 - 8 - 2017

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Date: 9/10/2017 12:18:00 PM
I could see the picture in my mind, as I read your work... Congrats Freddie, for your well-deserved top placement with this fine piece! :-)
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Date: 9/10/2017 7:49:00 AM
Beautiful write Freddie ... Congratulations on your win...
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Date: 9/9/2017 12:25:00 PM
Freddie, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/9/2017 6:52:00 AM
Well written deep expression, Freddie. Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 9/9/2017 4:04:00 AM
This is just wonderful and melancholy, Freddie, and I enjoyed it very much! Exquisitely-written as well, and a much-deserved win! Blessings and congrats, my friend! :-)
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Date: 9/8/2017 3:03:00 PM
Well written and congratulations. I was so happy to see your name on the winner's list. Party over there!
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Date: 9/8/2017 2:42:00 PM
Fantastic write Freddie! Excellent content, poetic expression, imagery and rhythm. Captivating from start to finish. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 9/8/2017 8:39:00 AM
Sounds like a winner to me! Sings like a lyric. A+ my friend!!!
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Date: 9/8/2017 7:56:00 AM
This has a very soft sound to it, unlike what you normally write. I like it very much indeed.
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Date: 9/8/2017 7:27:00 AM
- A painful poem, Freddie - A broken heart makes me sad - Luck in the contest - Best wishes for a lovely weekend, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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