Angels

Senryu on Angels Sponsor: marvin celestial sisterly cherub my heavenly guardian no longer earth bound related by blood heavenly family tree death can be a gift sanctified halo consecrated innocence sacred enchantment luminous aura pure magnificent seraph divine by virtue no tears anymore beautifully celestial sibling archangel Total # of syllables: 85 syllables Total # of words: 41 Syllables counted from: www.howmanysyllables.com ~Date Written: March 29, 2016~ ~1st Place Winner~

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Brian Mcclain

Date: 4/12/2016 9:34:00 PM

Hi Laura, Congratulations on your impressive win with this creative and evocative piece. Cheers, Brian

Lu Loo
Date: 4/13/2016 2:39:00 PM

thank you Brian :)-luloo

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/12/2016 9:04:00 PM

Very lovely, Laura, and such a blessed tribute to your dear lost sister...your "sibling archangel." Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Lu Loo
Date: 4/13/2016 2:38:00 PM

thank you Sandra :)-luloo

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 4/12/2016 5:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Laura

Lu Loo
Date: 4/13/2016 2:37:00 PM

Thank you Nayda :)-luloo

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/12/2016 5:12:00 PM

Congrats on your top win, Laura :)

Lu Loo
Date: 4/13/2016 2:35:00 PM

thank you Laura :)-luloo

Paul Callus

Date: 4/12/2016 3:48:00 PM

A truly beautiful and touching poem, Laura. One day both you and your sister will share together angelic love. ~ Congratulations on placing first:) ~ Regards // paul

Lu Loo
Date: 4/12/2016 4:03:00 PM

thank you sweet Paul..:)-luloo

Jan Allison

Date: 4/12/2016 3:47:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats on your wonderful win:-) hugs Jan xx

Lu Loo
Date: 4/12/2016 4:02:00 PM

thank you Jan :)-luloo

Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/12/2016 1:59:00 PM

Hi Luloo, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. I followed your wonderful words from start to finish and i found a peace at their heart. Your Angel shines bright in Heavenly majesty. An excellent write. May your pen ever run such gold onto the page. A seven my friend. Hugs....Mike. XX

Lu Loo
Date: 4/12/2016 4:02:00 PM

awww thank you Mike, you are so sweet always...:)-luloo

Moon Flower

Date: 4/12/2016 12:21:00 PM

Now my turn to say "Congrats on your wonderful piece" ;)

Lu Loo
Date: 4/12/2016 4:01:00 PM

thank you Moon Flower :)-luloo

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/12/2016 10:35:00 AM

Congrats on your superb win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Lu Loo
Date: 4/12/2016 11:10:00 AM

thank you BL...:)-luloo

Eve Roper

Date: 4/12/2016 9:38:00 AM

This is a beautiful vision of your sister presence.. Congratulations on your win :-)

Lu Loo
Date: 4/12/2016 11:10:00 AM

many thanks sweet lady :)-luloo

Probir Gupta

Date: 4/12/2016 9:27:00 AM

Beautiful... Congratulations for the win ....

Lu Loo
Date: 4/12/2016 11:09:00 AM

thank you Probir :)-luloo

Madalyn Rosario

Date: 4/12/2016 9:14:00 AM

This is beautiful tribute to your sister. Congratulations on your win.

Lu Loo
Date: 4/12/2016 9:18:00 AM

thank you Madalyn, and you have a beautiful name! I've encountered so many beautiful names since I've been here. And I'm not afraid to tell them! Have a great day :)-luloo

Rob Carmack

Date: 4/12/2016 2:12:00 AM

Beautiful poem and pictures. Congrats Laura.

Lu Loo
Date: 4/12/2016 7:56:00 AM

many thanks Rob, have a great day :)-luloo

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/12/2016 1:22:00 AM

Terrific form encredible win Luloo, congratulations, love Charlie...

Lu Loo
Date: 4/12/2016 7:55:00 AM

thank you sweet Charlie:)-luloo

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 4/11/2016 10:12:00 PM

Congratz Laura! You have Angels with you You are an angel visionary... Keep going...

Lu Loo
Date: 4/12/2016 7:55:00 AM

thank you very much Marvin for my placement, I am honored have a blessed day! :)-luloo

Rizwana Bhurani

Date: 4/5/2016 1:39:00 AM

Image and poem captivating....I wish I was an angel.....gl

Lu Loo
Date: 4/12/2016 7:54:00 AM

that would be awesome if we were all angels! But we can be angels on earth for the time being :) thank you Rizwana :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/3/2016 1:23:00 PM

Laura. I feel bad I did not mention last time here that I am sorry for the loss of your sister. She must have been so precious to you!

Lu Loo
Date: 4/3/2016 1:37:00 PM

Andrea, did I ever tell you how sweet you are? Thanks again and for all your kind comments, be blessed :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2016 8:52:00 PM

I can see you really love angels. From what I know of Marvin, he is going to love this series.

Lu Loo
Date: 4/3/2016 1:36:00 PM

Thank you Andrea:)-luloo

Jan Allison

Date: 3/29/2016 3:28:00 PM

Such a lovely string of haiku Laura I am sure Karen is always with you:-) hugs Jan xx7

Lu Loo
Date: 3/29/2016 9:07:00 PM

thank you Jan :)-luloo

Constance La France

Date: 3/29/2016 1:46:00 PM

Laura, these are lovely, wonderfully penned, and I love them 7 ~

Lu Loo
Date: 3/29/2016 2:18:00 PM

Thank you sweet Broken Wings...You are a very wonderful woman and I am grateful to have met you :)-luloo *smiles*