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Angelic She

Noised silence pulls me in a broken wilderness I drift amidst time circumnavigating what this dark abyss beckoning Suddenly, a light out of the black I appear into a blue day Angelic she, I've been found my dark abyss, now silenced .

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2015 6:27:00 AM

Good that the dark abyss has been silenced..I like the word circumnavigating..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

James Fraser
Date: 3/5/2015 12:33:00 PM

Hiya Sara, thanks for the lovely comment, James :) :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/4/2015 3:33:00 PM

i like the oxymoron on the first line and the latter..:) like imagery and the welcoming thoughts of hope Dino James.. :)! hahaha warm hugs!!//olive eloisa

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/6/2015 4:52:00 AM

weeeee yes, write the book! write the book! :D!

James Fraser
Date: 3/4/2015 5:14:00 PM

Hope has been delivered by Angelic She, to the lands of the kilted absorbed by he. Dino James is his name, blessed by the Oliz whom found him. It's time to write this story, and let the books pages tell from within. Mega hugs and smiles Olive Eloisa, always ;) xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/4/2015 3:24:00 PM

What an amazing tanka bringing hope for any hell's flames to be silenced by an angelic heart..WoW

James Fraser
Date: 3/4/2015 5:06:00 PM

Hi Charmaine, thank you for your always kind comments. Such flames silenced, heavens flow has engulfed such with love. Have a blessed Thursday, hugs, James :) :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/4/2015 3:11:00 PM

I have an angel that lights up from the sunlight - you senseyou have found an angel too James - may she continue to bring light into your life:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx

James Fraser
Date: 3/4/2015 5:02:00 PM

Hiya Jan, my prayers have been answered and tomorrow is a beautiful place, and the next, hugs James xx