Angel Hair; only look at clouds - Tristich AND Hexaline


cloudy consciousnesses
guarding a deep blue sky
a shadow or a streak

cloudy consciousnesses
where dark spoons up the rain
the whiteout spill of wings

cloudy consciousnesses
to a bed each alone
halo above, us fleece
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Rodgers Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 10:00 AM
Dear Paige, Congrats for POTD where your clouds feel almost sentient, soft guardians drifting above the blue, each stanza a small shift in weather, a different mood of the sky. A beautifully shaped pair of forms, and a pleasure to read. Blessings, Daniel
Goldsmith Avatar
July 2, 2026 at 10:06 AM
Belated Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. I have been off Soup for almost 2 weeks. I needed an Ink Transfusion. Hahaha!!! Now back and ready to go. Writing Away... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win.............
Dietrich Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 11:12 AM
So beautiful especially the middle part. Congrats on POTD
Rodrigues Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 9:46 AM
Congrats on POTD! …a dreamlike verse, a bit light…a bit dark
Onclaud Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 5:33 AM
masterclass un poetry...love how you used ' spoon,' paige...high five on your potd citation!
George Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 2:19 AM
Very demonstrative! Congratulations on your POTD honor dear Paige.
Jones Avatar
June 29, 2026 at 1:21 AM
Belated congratulations on your unique potd honor Paige!
Nicole Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 7:55 PM
' the whiteout spill of wings. ' I've never thought about clouds in this way. I must say, it's very clever and creative indeed. Congratulations Paige, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. : ) Hugs, Brandy
Hind Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 5:31 PM
Thank you, everyone, for the congratulations on my POTD. BIG BIG HUGS :)
Anaya Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 1:31 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Paige! Light of angels, darkness of cloudy consciousness, yours true to form, in your unique style, sweet one! Enjoy your day~ XO
Sharma  Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 10:24 AM
Gosh! You left me completely speechless with this very meticulously articulated write, dear Paige! Everything about this just whispers sheer excellence and I'm absolutely awestruck.. you're very talented in crafting these forms.. "where dark spoons up the rain the whiteout spill of wings" just impeccable! And "cloudy consciousness" just created the whole atmosphere! A very well worthy POTD! Heartiest congratulations ~ a fav.
Bayles Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 7:09 AM
I like your poem. Interesting form. Congratulations on POTD
Croft Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 6:44 AM
congratulations on your POTD!
Alex Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 5:45 AM
Very grand picturesque imagery. Congratulations!
Andresen Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 5:37 AM
- Lovely poem, Paige :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
Kitchin Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 5:02 AM
Paige, wonderfully penned. Congratulations on POTD.
Gibbons Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 4:59 AM
Congratulations Paige on a great POTD This is unique and love way its written. Love clouds, angels, hearts a floaty feel nothing better than gazing in clouds hugs
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 4:47 AM
returning to congratulate you, Paige, on a well deserved POTD...wishing you well
Edmonds  Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 2:47 AM
Congratulations Paige on having received Poem of the Day. Clouds are a delight to the eye, supreme paintings floating in the sky… Beryl
La France Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 2:35 AM
Paige, beautifully penned, interesting forms, congratulations on receiving the poem of the day honor~
DiMino Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 2:18 AM
Congratulations Paige. Well done. We really all know nothing, only think we know. We see through the glass cloudy.
Cunningham Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 1:08 AM
Well composed Paige, congratulations to you on today's POTD honour. Tom
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 27, 2026 at 4:24 PM
deeply layered and a delight to read.
Poet Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 1:38 PM
Another well-layered poem, Paige. Enjoyed
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