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Angel and Candy

Searching for clarity, relief and release, I long for a spirit to confirm internal peace. I long for a blanket to shelter my needs, as do all the people walking down all the streets. But, I thought I saw an angel walking down the avenue. Stop, I silently begged, I have need of you. Lately I’ve been confused. I don’t know what to do. Could I please borrow some comfort from you? Through rain I followed her down that dim avenue and my heart held forth its need for a clue. I could be sitting in a cafe on a perfect, sunny day and still I would hope that angel would look my way. The vision turned, candy bar in hand and I saw another human who struggled to understand. Still I wanted to hug her, show her something grand, give her some sort of sign that for one desperate moment, to me, she had been divine … ... CayCay 8/17/2015

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Date: 1/6/2016 12:42:00 AM
CayCay, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
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Date: 1/4/2016 3:16:00 PM
I believe in heavenly angels, CayCay, but there are also those angels who live among us and who influence our lives positively. A lovely poem and a worthy win!! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 1/3/2016 11:27:00 PM
NICE WIN
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Date: 1/2/2016 3:56:00 PM
Hi Lovely lady!! This poem is amazing, as all of your poems are :) You are very talented CayCay...God bless!! *smiles* *hugs* *congrats* -luloo
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Date: 1/2/2016 3:33:00 PM
Hi CayCay, beautiful poem, perfect moments are gifts from God. Congratulations. Love, Jean
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Date: 1/2/2016 1:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
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Date: 1/1/2016 11:47:00 PM
Congrats for that beautiful inspirational poem! I agree with Robert!
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Date: 1/1/2016 10:09:00 PM
Love your angel write CayCay. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/1/2016 8:39:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest CayCay.
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Date: 10/17/2015 1:31:00 PM
Excellent poem.
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Date: 10/2/2015 8:00:00 AM
Hi CayCay. I believe that angels do walk among us and the come in many packages. I also believe that God will use us in many ways if we are open to it. One or two words to a lost soul or simply a smile can change a persons life if God is the divine force behind it. And we may, for one moment be that lost souls angel. All is possible with God, my friend.... Robert.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/2/2015 8:41:00 PM
We are indeed angels to one another at any given moment and, most often, we aren't even aware of it. That is what the poem is about. Thank you, Robert ... CayCay
Date: 9/20/2015 10:40:00 AM
Very moving... Thank you for sharing... Best wishes, Julia
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/20/2015 11:02:00 AM
Thank you so much, Julia, for commenting. This is one of my favorites so I'm especially happy that you could relate to it ... CayCay
Date: 8/18/2015 12:03:00 PM
I enjoyed your Angel poem, CayCay, I don't think I've read you before but hope to read more of you in the future. And I hope you will read one of my poems, too. ~~Darlene
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/1/2015 1:22:00 PM
I am tardy with this response. By now I have read a great portion of your poems, enjoying each and every one. This poem is one of my personal favorites from my pen, thank you for reading it. Blessings ... CayCay

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