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Angel -Fv Premiere Contest Winner

It's way back before I reached Age of double-digits But very clear in my memories Is a book-store boy Little taller than us Forever referred "little devil" by the owner But for us,my brother, sister and me He was our sweet big brother For he gave us most attention Among all the older girls and boys We shared with him Stories of classes and friends On our way back home In his astonishment and laughters Sometimes he shed a tear or two Quenching our innocent curiosity Said it's because of dust from busy roads But now we three perceive It was his grief to be left out from education One day after our final exams Rain came down in torrents In the dim gleam of cloudy noon He accompanied us to home soaking through rains And then Dad's transfer Made us go places on the next terms But that boy has left his imprints In childhood chapters of our life We couldn't manage to know about his whereabouts Or even his name returning to our old town So we three gave him a name "Kind Angel" After all what's in a name 14/03/2019

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Date: 4/12/2019 2:49:00 PM
Congrats on being in the top 100 new poems! Also bravo on your win in the contest.
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 4/13/2019 5:30:00 AM
Thank you for making me notice that this poem got it's place in new100 top poems.Elated to know this.
Date: 4/4/2019 6:47:00 AM
A heartfelt poem, Purbasha Roy. Congrats!
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 4/4/2019 6:58:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/31/2019 11:00:00 AM
Hello Purbasha Roy, I like the name that was given the book store boy.I hope you find him. have a nice day my friend.
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 3/31/2019 11:13:00 AM
Thankful for your visit and comment.Wishing you a great week ahead.
Date: 3/19/2019 6:40:00 AM
This is so heart breaking and worthy of first place dear Purbasha, I love your tender words and I will pray for his return some day, even it is only in Angel form. Love and hugs. xo
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 3/19/2019 9:48:00 AM
Yes,I just wish he returns back.
Date: 3/19/2019 5:52:00 AM
Very touch, and a unique approach to the contest - congratulations! CayCay
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 3/19/2019 5:53:00 AM
Thank you!!!
Date: 3/18/2019 6:09:00 PM
Why did I give you first place? Because you made me cry! Some people touch our hearts. Some called him "Little Devil" but you saw him as "Kind Angel" Congratulations on a fine first place win!
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 3/18/2019 8:01:00 PM
Oh! I am overwhelmed .Thank you for the placement.Humbled and happy!

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