Angel -Fv Premiere Contest Winner

It's way back before I reached 
       Age of double-digits
     But very clear in my memories
       Is a book-store boy
    Little taller than us
      Forever referred "little devil" by the owner
   But for us,my brother, sister and me
     He was our sweet big brother
   For he gave us most attention 
     Among all the older girls and boys
   We shared with him
      Stories of classes and friends
    On our way back home
      In his astonishment  and laughters
   Sometimes he shed a tear or two
      Quenching our innocent curiosity
   Said it's because of dust from busy roads
      But now we three perceive
   It was his grief to be left out from education
      One day after our final exams
   Rain came down in torrents
      In the dim gleam of cloudy noon
   He accompanied us to home soaking through rains
      And then Dad's transfer
   Made us go places on the next terms
     But that boy has left his imprints
   In childhood chapters of our life
      We couldn't manage to know about his whereabouts
   Or even his name returning to our old town
      So we three gave him a name "Kind Angel"
   After all what's in a name

14/03/2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 4/12/2019 2:49:00 PM
Congrats on being in the top 100 new poems! Also bravo on your win in the contest.
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 4/13/2019 5:30:00 AM
Thank you for making me notice that this poem got it's place in new100 top poems.Elated to know this.
Date: 4/4/2019 6:47:00 AM
A heartfelt poem, Purbasha Roy. Congrats!
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 4/4/2019 6:58:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/31/2019 11:00:00 AM
Hello Purbasha Roy, I like the name that was given the book store boy.I hope you find him. have a nice day my friend.
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 3/31/2019 11:13:00 AM
Thankful for your visit and comment.Wishing you a great week ahead.
Date: 3/19/2019 6:40:00 AM
This is so heart breaking and worthy of first place dear Purbasha, I love your tender words and I will pray for his return some day, even it is only in Angel form. Love and hugs. xo
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 3/19/2019 9:48:00 AM
Yes,I just wish he returns back.
Date: 3/19/2019 5:52:00 AM
Very touch, and a unique approach to the contest - congratulations! CayCay
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 3/19/2019 5:53:00 AM
Thank you!!!
Date: 3/18/2019 6:09:00 PM
Why did I give you first place? Because you made me cry! Some people touch our hearts. Some called him "Little Devil" but you saw him as "Kind Angel" Congratulations on a fine first place win!
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Purbasha Roy
Date: 3/18/2019 8:01:00 PM
Oh! I am overwhelmed .Thank you for the placement.Humbled and happy!
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