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And Woody Herman Played

Blues in the Night.

A malignant moon
shines his metallic claws -
combs my hair and brushes me forward.
I am alone in the shadowy crooks 
of a poisoned metropolis.

A clandestine garbage chute -
where waifs and strays burn
within the fetid bowels 
of a cavernous concrete underbelly.

The orphanage awaits my arrival,
as muted outcries are crushed 
beneath my footsteps. 
A parentless prison
teeters atop Utopia's dreaded brim;
the hamlet where Orwell slew Hilton.

St. Peter has been released
and no longer tends the kitchen.
Agony and angel wings reneged
a redundant brotherhood of sorts.
His recipe for remorse shall be missed. 

Blues in the Night.

In the distance, 
feigned epileptic outbursts
placates a patron's fears.
Caffeine injections

stimulates another's venial sins
as it magnifies their cardinal options.
An insomnious woman converses
with a napkin holder. The surface

is dull and unreflective, like she.
Banter never-to-be heard
by her never-to-be gentleman caller.
I am home –
amongst the dead I adore.

A haggard waitress serves me a menu.
A laminated journal stained 
with melancholy and mustard.
Desolation and demi-tasse
are tonight’s midnight special.
Ten cents additional, if you order deluxe.

Blues in the Night.

I twiddle my thumbs 
for I have no other’s to borrow.
I catch my rugged reflection 
in the asylum’s window.
I espy my counterpart again

in a twisted spoon -
realizing I’m three utensils short 
from a grievous quartet salted
with Mack Sennett misfits.

A collection of dishes clatter
above the sanatorium’s jukebox. 
I place my spoon on the counter
and pick up a lifeless knife.
I envy its potential and possibilities

as Woody Herman croons 
in the background.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Mister Roboto Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 1:37 AM
This is something very amazing to me! Very cool!
Adeite Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 10:05 AM
Congrats once again as you are being honoured once again with another feature of the week. We can’t get this kind of well deserved honour else where other than poetrysoup. Keep writing, you are a great poet… Leke
Austin Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 5:24 AM
Another 'golden oldy'....More congrats on this classic. Big love, daver
Brown Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 4:17 AM
John,congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 2:16 PM
There is something in this poem that just carried me back to watching the old black and white TV. I've enjoyed this poem and have read it a number of times, still getting that old feeling of a 1950's mystery. Congrats on the win and the re-feature. Vince
Christian Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 10:54 AM
wel done its amazing news you have 2 poems featured this week, so cool God bless from diane
Tugaff Avatar
May 25, 2009 at 2:13 AM
Wonderful and amazing write from a great poet in the 21st Century. You are one of my favs. Ernilando
George   Avatar
January 13, 2009 at 9:00 AM
Sitting in a Cafe on a summer night in the seediest area of downtown Vancouver (Hastings Street) observing the real world - outside my box. I was fascinated with this place and spent many hours there - sometimes against my better judgement, but no harm ever came to me. Some of life's greatest lessons - I learned there. A MASTERPIECE of writing, John. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN! Lainie
B Avatar
January 12, 2009 at 9:08 PM
wonderful write... congratulations ...
Mac Donald Avatar
January 11, 2009 at 5:52 AM
Hi John! Beautifully done by a one who could show no less than a greatness! Jazzy-musical, outstanding imagery, I dunno what they were serving, but you took over in the kitchen and created a delicious masterpiece! Blessing to you and yours, John!! Mikki
Bolton Avatar
January 11, 2009 at 5:30 AM
My gut tells me this was from the gut . . . My literary sense tells me this was written by someone who has seen life at its worst . . . With an almost "Beat" stylistic . . . er . . . beat, this poem is Kerouck-on-the-road mentality and Bukowski-in-the-rot-gut-bottomed-out . . . Add a bit of colorful clarinet and saxophone and you have absolutely got you a winner here, even if you hadn't won . . .
Mallett Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 6:42 PM
Congratulations for your win. Great poem!
Sullivan Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 4:27 PM
Congratulations, John, on your well-deserved win on Soup. Have a wonderful new year. All best, Orma
Gass Avatar
January 8, 2009 at 8:38 AM
This is wonderful, John. The imagery is vivid and filled with so many great phrases. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, Robin
Haniff Avatar
January 7, 2009 at 1:45 PM
congrats on being featured, great poem....Maryam
Buys Avatar
January 7, 2009 at 1:27 PM
Warmest congratulations on your win in this contest. This is still on of my favorites, ok all your poems are favorites, but this one is a favorite favorite. Very well done. Love Heidie
Shank Avatar
January 7, 2009 at 8:38 AM
simply divine, this is the epitome of poetry, the beginning, and the ending were superb, well deserved acknowledgement.......
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 6:41 PM
This is one I can read and hear the music in my mind. A well deserved winner in the contest. Congratulations, John. Vince
Wellbelove Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 2:48 PM
Congratulations on getting second place in the Poetry Soup contest - well deserved :) Christopher
Kelly Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 10:03 AM
I do believe , Lord Heck , I was the very first to pass coment on this piece , some moons ago . It is a super , vibrant piece of writing that will stand the test of time . Sincere congratulations on your masterpiece !!! Play onnnnnn ....
Austin Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 7:03 AM
Congrats on this win, John, an experienced look at a big city's seamy side I would assume. Woody Herman and the blues fit perfectly. Again, congrats on this fine piece. Love, daver
Brown Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 5:47 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest and the feature of your poem John. Love, Carol
Young Avatar
January 4, 2009 at 10:10 PM
Sir john, congratulations on your win as usual. truth to tell, it is a gift that you have listed my name in your favorite poets' list. thanks what an honor coming from the poet i look up to. always, GiNo
Lokken Avatar
January 4, 2009 at 4:07 PM
Congratulation on your second place win! Your work is amazing! Best wishes, Sara:)
Richards Avatar
January 4, 2009 at 2:41 PM
Super poem...and well deserved to be a finalist!! Congratulations John...this one was so deep and steeping with the feeling of the music! ~ Love, Carrie
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