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And It Is Wet

A hummingbird hovers outside my window
Admiring itself in the reflection
I see its colors shine in the morning sun 
Almost hypnotizing 
 
Staring, I wonder if it sees me
Alone behind dusty mini-blinds
Vertical slices of faux wood
Narrowly showing the world beyond
 
I should smile at this “precious” scene
Spring is near in signs and actions
Yet I do not, I can not, for I despise spring
It is a symbol of life…new life
 
Life is the darkest thought of my mind’s shadows
What good is it, new or old or otherwise
You breathe, you wake, you want and you lose
Poetic splatters can’t mask these feelings
 
Pleading images claim all empty fault
As crimson blood runs the gutters
Splashing on concrete cracks twisted about my neck
Laughing from a back seat around the next corner
 
And still that hummingbird lingers…pointing
Tiny wings move in a rapid dance
It’s red throat casting aspersions in my direction
As I reach for my own…and it is wet, and I am crying

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/19/2016 12:04:00 PM
This gives me a sad feeling...It started beautifully and turned heart-wrenching in the end : (..Am touched.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/11/2019 9:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Charmaine for all of your kindness.
Date: 10/19/2016 6:01:00 AM
poignant expression... wonderful piece using the hummingbird to depict your poetic mood, chris.. huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 10/19/2016 8:35:00 AM
Thank you so very much Nette for your kind words.
Date: 10/18/2016 8:13:00 PM
The imagery is so dynamic Chris, beautifully written...
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Chris Green
Date: 10/19/2016 8:34:00 AM
Thanks so very much Tim.
Date: 10/18/2016 6:47:00 PM
This is wicked Chris, amazing as usual. The Cherokee Indians believe the hummingbird brought them the tobacco seed. /|\
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Chris Green
Date: 10/19/2016 8:34:00 AM
That's very cool Rick, I didn't know that. Thank so much for reading and commenting and sharing some of your knowledge.
Date: 10/18/2016 6:00:00 PM
Oh my, no words Chris, you've outdone yourself now! Pièce de résistance !! I do adore hummingbirds...
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Chris Green
Date: 10/19/2016 8:33:00 AM
Thank you so very much Paloma. I was hopping you'd like this one.

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