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And I Wander

I wander the meandering path of a stream where birds, tweet a sweet melodic symphony and the trees tremble; when suddenly- I am in a lush garden and see a church, among the many swaying flowers of all hues imaginable; but the flowers turn to rows and rows and rows, of engraved headstones ... and I wander in my dream. ____________________ June 13, 2021 Poetry/Verse/and I wander Copyright Protected, ID 06-1363-173-13 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Bite Size Poems, No 7 sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 06/17/2021 Honorable Mention

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Date: 6/21/2021 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Love the ending. Enjoy your win with blessings...............
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Constance La France
Date: 6/21/2021 12:27:00 PM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations and for the compliment, love _Constance
Date: 6/18/2021 8:10:00 AM
Particularly estute imagery with a wry twist ending makes this really enjoyable and well crafted. Kudos.
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Date: 6/18/2021 9:03:00 AM
Greg, thank you for the compliment on my poem, appreciate, peace _Constance
Date: 6/13/2021 3:43:00 PM
Fine dream sequenced poem, Constance, maybe my favorite genre...
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Constance La France
Date: 6/14/2021 9:18:00 AM
James, thank you so much for the visit and comment, peace _Constance
Date: 6/13/2021 1:03:00 PM
Creative work with a surprise ending. Enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a winner to me. Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 6/14/2021 9:18:00 AM
Sara, thanks for the compliment, appreciate, love _Constance
Date: 6/13/2021 11:11:00 AM
Beautiful poem with incredible imagery, Constance:-) Good luck in the contest!
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Constance La France
Date: 6/14/2021 9:19:00 AM
Edward, thanks so much for the compliment, peace _Constance

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