Get Your Premium Membership

And

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Ann Foster.


And Goat heads, cockleburs, and cow pies. These are the things we live with, in the country. Some you step on, some travel in your clothes, and some stink. Foxtails. That sounds so beautiful. They are terrible. They cling and bring pain to the feet of dogs. Don't get me started... on mosquitoes and blood-sucking vermin... that find us all in the day, and in the night. Yet we still go outside. We still want to touch, trees, and flowers... and lay in the grass. Ticks stay away, fleas go somewhere else. This is the best place, to be calm and set the pace... backward, or at least slowdown. Chores make the time pass without notice. Tired muscles and an achy back replace the need to be concerned... about the small things. Yet inside, peace reigns. Even at the cost of life's tiny inconveniences, there is a payment of joy, that only He can dole out.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/29/2022 2:27:00 PM
Owww ~ goat heads! Must be a hundred times I stepped on one barefoot growing up :) Cow patties ~ you're alerted by the flies (usually). :) I enjoyed your poem a lot!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2022 2:09:00 AM
Living in the country makes this "Ticks stay away, fleas go somewhere else. " a real part of your hopes and dreams!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/22/2022 8:20:00 AM
Hello Ann - Hi. I found this entry to bring a smile because I think we can all relate and second your thoughts. Yes, "And" indeed. You leave us with imagery. Thank you for sharing. It was a pleasure turning to your page. Have a wonderful day.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/22/2022 12:46:00 AM
I looked and looked and failed to find a would be farmers wife. You ladies are a special human " subspecies," with tired vacjs, cie ist with mosquitoes, vermin, & know pretty foxtails, hurt man's best friend. Shalom shalom Ann. Gotta DAVE
Login to Reply
Date: 4/17/2022 7:33:00 PM
And --- never overromanticize country life. That's for sure. You sleep at night though! :) gw
Login to Reply
Date: 4/17/2022 10:40:00 AM
Wow! I love a jaunt in the countryside, but not with those pests. Well written.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things