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Ancient Tombs

I say a prayer at a loved ones tomb I leave a flower, for in my heart they bloom To me they'll always be a treasure Never to be forgotten, ever But there is a tomb where treasures abound A place where pyramids are found King Tut's tomb, where treasures did bloom Treasures that the departed did not assume The patriarchs of the bible are laid to rest In the city of Hebron in Palestine Abraham, Isaac, Jacob were blessed Their tomb is now a holy shrine It is known as the Cave of Machpelah There is a tomb where old bones lie Unsung in life, but now at rest The treasure here is hard to deny They gave it all, the ultimate measure They'll always be a national treasure The Tomb of the unknown soldier

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Date: 3/19/2016 11:56:00 PM
Joseph, nice to see your poem got an HM on Justin's latest contest. HUGS ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/11/2016 10:36:00 PM
gosh, I keep clicking on things and can't find a poem of yours I haven't read yet. Let me know if you know of one for me to read, Joseph!
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Date: 2/25/2016 9:32:00 AM
This is beautiful and creative. Thank you so much for this lovely and useful share....
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Date: 2/22/2016 9:01:00 PM
Hi joseph...outstanding depth here..really loved it alot
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Date: 2/17/2016 12:43:00 PM
Wonderful ancient treasures as is the poem. wonderful entry for the contest, Joseph. Elaine
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Date: 2/17/2016 11:06:00 AM
Yours is a pilgrimage to pay respect to ancient tombs which have a say in our world's history, Joseph. Tombs to unknown soldiers have played a major role through the ages. gl in the contest. // paul
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Date: 2/17/2016 1:28:00 AM
They live on in the hearts of those who admire them and carry on their legacy. Your multi-layered theme is well captured here, and enjoyed the references to the Cave of Machpelah, especially. Best of luck on the contest (as I assume this was written for) :)
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Date: 2/13/2016 6:37:00 PM
You got some different tombs in this poem, Joseph. I find this topic very interesting since I am not sure where to go with it. Good luck to you in the contest.
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Date: 2/12/2016 8:07:00 PM
I like this write, Joseph. The historical references on top of the reflective tone at the start is a nod toward the effort of past civilizations and people who paved the way for a freer society. Best wishes!
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Date: 2/12/2016 6:35:00 AM
Very good
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