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Two ancient super powers had it all, Before the old Atlantis fall, India with might of mind, Could will you dead, Or send you blind. Iron thunder bolt,ten thousand suns, Birds turned white, Elephants run, Everyone was dead, not one, Just skeletons surviving. (still radioactive today) The rod of death, the fatal shaft, Mushroom cloud, the searing blast, Indra’s thunder, as it passed, Death was there to plunder. India was invaded from the sky, Had mentally killed the Atlantis kind, Atlantis invader left the place, But vowed revenge Atomic rays, Valixi delivered thunder. Ten thousand years before the Lord, A battle fought a world destroyed. Missiles from the deep of space, Giant rock falls, Atlantis erased . Rama was not surprised.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/22/2011 9:18:00 AM
Don, Quite interesting mystery piece, Congratulations on your accomplished victory. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/22/2011 5:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn Devonshire's "Unsolved Mysteries" contest Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2011 7:08:00 PM
rockin' mysterious write, Don. Never heard it this way before well done and congrats to you
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Date: 7/21/2011 5:00:00 PM
Congrats DON on your excellent win with this intense story in poetry luv.. and much success in your own first contest which a delightful theme.. oh.. no soupy mail .. what's up?
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Date: 7/21/2011 4:07:00 PM
I'm going to have to look up this one. It's new to me. Congratulations on your win, Don. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/21/2011 3:28:00 PM
Gosh, Don, where did you dig all this up at? So many mysteries to uncover in this contest! Congrats on your win, my friend.
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Date: 7/21/2011 3:00:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Carolyn, Don
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Date: 7/21/2011 2:13:00 PM
Excellent account on your theory of the demise of the Atlantean civilization, Don. I had to look up Rama and Valixi (and I've done a lot of reading on Atlantis), so you did a terrific job. Congratulations on your win in the mystery contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/17/2011 10:28:00 PM
wow! very interesting,,, and its history... Destroyed much... somethings are just to evilll,,,, thanks for sharing,..p.d.
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