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Anacreontic Verse

Slithering Warmth Farewells and goodbyes leash the heart seal the lips percolate the emotions to let brine drip slowly from swollen eyes Long lasting relationships distance from the eyes' purview The warmth of the hugs and kisses silently vanish slithering away without control Captured moments remain in the mind's camera of what was and could have been if some force had intervened to stop the hour THIRD October 30, 2015 Contest: Anacreontic Verse 1 Sponsor: Edward Ebbs

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Date: 11/20/2015 9:18:00 PM
An emotional write, Balveen! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/20/2015 11:02:00 PM
Thanks Kim!
Date: 11/20/2015 4:51:00 PM
A lovely fast flowing poem with a impressive title. Congrats on a worthy top win. Regards // paul
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/20/2015 11:05:00 PM
Paul, love reading your analysis on poems of all poets! Thanks ever so much! Regards, Balveen
Date: 11/20/2015 3:15:00 PM
Anacreontic verse a new adventure for most of us but this winner will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/20/2015 11:06:00 PM
Sara, you've truly inflated my spirits! Thanks! Love, Balveen
Date: 11/19/2015 3:40:00 PM
many congrats Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/20/2015 4:46:00 AM
Thanks Jan! Love, Balveen
Date: 11/19/2015 10:21:00 AM
quite a deep one here, and very well written - congrats on your win!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/19/2015 12:38:00 PM
Thank you so much for the praise, Charlotte!
Date: 11/19/2015 9:11:00 AM
Such a smooth flow in your words, Balveen, that speak of lost love. Congratulations on your nice win in Ed's contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/19/2015 12:41:00 PM
You are always generous with your praises Sandra! Love, Balveen
Date: 11/19/2015 8:19:00 AM
Balveen, I really enjoyed this. It flows like a single moment of thought. "to let brine..." wonderful image.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/19/2015 8:56:00 AM
How flattering, James! Thanks!
Date: 11/18/2015 8:11:00 PM
Balveen, Congratulations in Edward Ebbs, AV1 Contest. HUGS **SKAT**
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/19/2015 5:19:00 AM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 11/18/2015 7:39:00 PM
Congratulations Balveen
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/19/2015 5:19:00 AM
Thanks Nayda!
Date: 11/18/2015 7:25:00 PM
I am happy with all the enteries, congratulations on your well deserved win...thank you for participating!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/18/2015 7:31:00 PM
Thanks Edward! This verse form was interesting!

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