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"An X-Mess Carol" Somewhere standing barefoot in the sand, she thought with guilty pleasure “This is the KORO SEA!” and conjured up a multitude of story scenarios Buccaneers, Pirates Parlay, Treasure Maps, Davy Jones Locker, Jack Sparrow, Ho’es you know, those childhood things and for a short hit, guilty pleasure then the tide dragged the sand out hard from underneath her feet, she was sinking. 3 Christmases had gone by. 2 missed. The moon was pulling the tide extra hard She felt she was being dragged feet first out to sea Magnetic, gravity “SHE” was calling her in again. The Kid missed her, Though she would never admit it. The Kid didn’t need to hear “SHE”, she could feel her, that’s called Empathy. The Kid understood what was so very wrong, this time what was amiss Too late now though to turn around. The Kid had backed herself into a corner between a rock and a hard place with a spiteful, alienating lobbyist. Quietly she said under her breath, “This isn’t Christmas”. Polarized. Staring way out to the horizon, she thought, “This is not an escape - “THIS IS POLITICS”. “Politics can be a dirty business.” The Kid heard SHE’s voice speak to her arriving on the breeze. The Kid recalled talks about Paris, “…..won’t that be great!” “SHE” had said, looking over her shoulder at the Kid, as she grated lemon rind,then beat the Double Thick Cream, Lemoncello Vanilla Bean Paste, Mascarpone for the Christmas Trifle in the Kitchen Whizz, test taste. Place Cointreau soaked Savoardi in a fine crystal bowl, pour over the mix, repeat 3 times add passionfruit pulp, sliced bananas, slivered almonds, fresh raspberries. “After graduation. You and me Kid. Paris it is!!” All the effort with the Xmas Lunch, Ham and Turkey, a special brunch. Money scarce, but nothing spared, her kid was HOME - that’s all that she cared. Although it was only the two of them what the Kid didn’t see back then, was not just that “SHE” always catered for the Kid’s every whim…. ”SHE” was the only one who had listened intently to all her fabulous stories the character keys, the maps that the kid was drawing the delivery of her precis, this, the shared commonality - and when “SHE” asked for a repeat, it wasn’t that she wasn’t listening she was keenly taking THE FULL PLOT back in again. “It’s not important what’s under the tree, what matters most is who’s around it, see?” This is what is important at Christmas. “HOME”. The Kid was now taking the full plot in… (Lovejoy-Burton/2017 Dec)

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Date: 12/23/2017 2:56:00 PM
In response to Freddie Robinson Jr.'s comment re Lunar Queen. Very interesting. I shall draw on her elemental wisdom for inspiration. Thank you FRJnr. Lunar Queen:“She of the Celestial Crescent” “There is a deep feminine wisdom that recognizes the importance of rest and replenishment as essential balancing to our actions of power and demonstration. You are asked to allow this replenishment for yourself now, trusting that you are in a cycle of creation that is about to shift into a new phase. Release and enjoy the process without having to control or force it.”
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Date: 12/23/2017 3:10:00 PM
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Date: 12/23/2017 2:57:00 PM
"This oracle comes to you at a time when you are shifting from one phase in your spiritual and creative journey into a new phase." Right-on track. Spooky.
Date: 12/23/2017 2:31:00 PM
Beautiful truths evoked by your talented pen, Leanne! Such wonderful storytelling ... and my how your mind spins around your sea of dreams. You're a Lunar queen for real! Great poem ... an instant PSoup classic. Love and more love always.
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Date: 12/23/2017 2:53:00 PM
Thank you FRJnr. Perhaps she'll receive the message perhaps not. I will spend my Christmas writing,I can think of nothing better than that,next to spending Christmas with the "One I Love Most". I don't know about Lunar.I have an element of Dark,which I love.All good you need the Dark to bring the Light. Have a lovely Christmas, I shall continue to keep an eye on your very dark, deep poems of life, they make a person think longer and harder about the real purpose of it all.
Date: 12/20/2017 5:56:00 AM
You have a unique way to tell your stories and such a vivid imagination..
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Date: 12/20/2017 1:37:00 PM
I'm just cutting teeth...my unique way of telling stories pales into comparison to some other unique beings in this Soupish Realm. I love everything I am reading here, particularly the poems/stories that stir emotion...or even controversy. Thank you Silent One.
Date: 12/18/2017 8:01:00 AM
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Date: 12/18/2017 5:49:00 PM
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