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Had to remove the other poem from the contest becuause the web-site wasn't allowing me to make changes; this one is for contest with 45 words

warm whiffs embrace, ardent blaze; flickering flame awakes an ache. tame harmony, into romantic lust, burst orchid fragrance in darken moment, amid midnight twilight. passion sound roaring thunder within, warm cinders soothe budding moment. like there’s no tomorrow. silence gently fades breathless in cascade release. 6/5/2020 Some Kind Of Sensual Poetry Contest Sponsored by: nette onclaud 45 words

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Date: 6/8/2020 9:24:00 AM
This is a fragrant sensual poem Eve! I love how it drips gradually and then turns into a rush of emotions. So poignant yet sensuous! Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/8/2020 6:37:00 AM
Amazing poem on Orchids mam. Well done. :-) Congratulations on your placement:-) Take care.With regards~Deepa
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Date: 6/6/2020 1:24:00 PM
I have pasted my comment from your original poem. I know another member was also having issues with editing their poems yesterday, looks like there is a glitch. beautifully sensual Eve I adore orchids and have many growing in my lounge I currently have 8 in flower:-) hugs Jan
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Date: 6/6/2020 12:54:00 PM
Great sensual poetry here Eve, all the bestfor Nette's contest. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/5/2020 6:08:00 PM
It got more and more sensual with each verse. The last verse stunning!
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Date: 6/5/2020 5:25:00 PM
Glad to see you managed to enter this lovely sensual poem in time for the contest, Eve! Hugs // paul
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/5/2020 5:29:00 PM
Thank you for the heads up. I don't know if it's my computer or the web-site making it complicated for me to make corrections. Hugs Eve

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