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Once upon a time In the land of rhymes The word orange, came to be Nature was his mother The sun, his big brother They placed him for all to see He swung from the trees Touched flowers, birds and bees Loved clowns and circus balloons Alerted everyone of danger Had a fiery anger At night he swam with the moon There were no other words Ever spoken or heard That could ever duplicate his sound But orange shows pride Goes along for the ride In hopes a rhyme can be found For now it's his curse To hang out in free verse His personality remains bubbly and light Although he's unique Things never look bleak You never know, someday one just might February 16 2017 by Daniel Turner

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Date: 6/9/2021 7:22:00 PM
I came way back here to this oldie i saw already to tell you, Gosh dang it, danny, why why?? all those rules? I wanted so bad to win your contest and I am too old and muddled brained now to put the title you wanted. why? why? why? (I am actually doing brain therapy for my concussion brain Wish me luck. so far, it's not helping my conditions at all.)_I'm just kidding around but I feel so stupid and not one person even reached out to me on reading my poem to let me know I needed to retitle it!!
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Date: 3/13/2017 9:55:00 PM
Back for a pat on the back D.T. Congratulations...
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Date: 3/13/2017 7:20:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, Daniel, I want to thank you for entering my contest. I love this very imaginative write ... Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/12/2017 1:14:00 PM
Cute story of a word with no rhyme. I wrote one about the colour purple, but I think there may be a couple words that rhyme with purple. I'll share it sometime.
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Date: 2/18/2017 5:35:00 PM
A quaint fairytale very creativity written. The imagery through your words are vibrant and alive, I especially like the character you gave the colour orange.:-) I fondly remember nursery rhymes being read to me as a child and the awe I felt. I hope they don't go the way of the dodo bird with technology ruling the world. Fairytales are important and your poem shows why. A joy to read :-) blessings, lynn
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Date: 2/20/2017 10:36:00 AM
We read them to our children. I'd like to think they contributed immensely to their love of books and reading. Thank you, Lynn Marie:)
Date: 2/17/2017 8:40:00 AM
Nice one Daniel. I love how you wrote this, giving orange a personality even though there is no rhyme, but that makes it unique. Great poem.
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Date: 2/17/2017 8:53:00 AM
Nursery rhymes are supposed to teach something. I'm not sure what mine teaches but I had fun. Thank you, Chris. Have a super weekend!
Date: 2/17/2017 6:11:00 AM
This is so lovely... Really very cute... Thanks for sharing...A big 7...
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Date: 2/17/2017 8:51:00 AM
Thank you, Supraja:) Have a great weekend!
Date: 2/17/2017 2:35:00 AM
Great. Love reading your poetry #7
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Date: 2/17/2017 8:51:00 AM
Thank you, Elizabeth:)
Date: 2/16/2017 11:34:00 PM
'Hanging out in free verse' in the land of rhymes...lol..Very nicely done Daniel..
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Date: 2/17/2017 8:50:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph:) Have a great weekend.
Date: 2/16/2017 11:07:00 PM
The curse of it all...was wondering if you were ok. Haven't seen anything from you for a few days. But all seems well after reading this offering. Best wishes DT.
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Date: 2/17/2017 8:47:00 AM
I just can't do it 24/7 Charlie. I have to take some time to clear my thoughts. Thank you for dropping by and have a great weekend:)
Date: 2/16/2017 7:54:00 PM
this is SO CUTE, Daniel. Wish I had thought up this idea. DANG
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Date: 2/17/2017 8:45:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea:)
Date: 2/16/2017 6:24:00 PM
Ah but you must look between the crack in the door to find it : )) ...Door hinge
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Date: 2/16/2017 6:42:00 PM
Yeah, there's also storage, forage and porridge they all come close but no cigar:) Thanks Tim:)

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