Get Your Premium Membership

An Old Lover

Death, but an old lover, always seems to find his way Back within your sheets in the middle of lonely nights. As you feel your body regress, his sharp presence becomes all too familiar: It is inviting; it is sensual; it is an addiction that will never go away. “I will love you for eternity, darling, and will never let you go.” His poisonous words are promising, And you think to accept them all too soon, once again. “But I must fight,” you try to convince yourself. You must fight the comfort of his promises, The chill of his bearing that stings your sensitive skin. The sun rises, and he slowly vanishes into the warmth of a new day. You can feel your bones strengthen with the rising beat of your heart. But his body stains your sheets, And you know his sweet promise will forever cling to you each passing day: “I will love you forever, darling, and will never let you go.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/10/2015 10:16:00 PM
Bethaney, Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup's Home Page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Login to Reply
Date: 1/5/2015 5:26:00 AM
- A warm welcome to the P - Soup and into the new year 2015 - I look forward to reading more of your poems this year - I hope you will enjoy reading and writing with us, Bethaney - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 1/2/2015 10:56:00 PM
Hi Bethaney, this is very sweet, and deep, started off darkly. I love how you end the poem. You are on a great path, choosing to write and post on this site. On the bottom, you wrote, you are new to the writing poetry world. You did well for a newcomer. Linda...
Login to Reply
Date: 1/2/2015 10:56:00 PM
PS....... Bethaney, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
Login to Reply
Date: 1/2/2015 2:36:00 PM
I am new to the whole writing poetry world, so any sort of criticism and comments are greatly appreciated. Thank you!
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry