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An Offering of Poppies

On the eve of November 11th, I never sleep more than a wink or two. How could I? So I rise before dawn, my heart overflowing with a gurgling silence of souls rallied from brave men fallen, patriots, my friends, who gave their lives for fellow countrymen. As the bugle of duty calls far in the background, it is an ultimate honor to dress in uniform and lead the Remembrance Day parade. wreath of red poppies flow the wartime memories ~ sudden gush of rain AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on April 24, 2019 for contest PICK A TITLE, VOL.4 - HAIBUN - AN OFFERING OF POPPIES sponsored by EDWARD IBEH - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 5/26/2019 9:28:00 AM
Very well written, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/24/2019 6:09:00 PM
Marvelous write, Line:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 5/24/2019 9:13:00 PM
Thank you, Edward. A most inspiring contest with a fun form.
Date: 4/25/2019 3:50:00 PM
You have written this haibun with an able pen, Line. I like the topic and the end haiku. ~Regards // paul
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Date: 4/25/2019 6:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paul. Most appreciated.
Date: 4/25/2019 8:06:00 AM
..as the lists of those we must remember grows....Very nice treatment of the title theme Line.
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Date: 4/25/2019 9:16:00 AM
Thank you, John. Most appreciated.
Date: 4/25/2019 4:54:00 AM
A fine tribute, Line!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/25/2019 7:12:00 AM
Thanks, James. Much appreciated.
Date: 4/24/2019 11:41:00 PM
A beautiful remembrance for those who laid their lives on the line for others. Well penned and best of luck in the contest.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/24/2019 11:52:00 PM
Thanks, ML. Most appreciated.

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