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Look-see - a brief look or inspection

out of sight - not visible, extremely good

An Ode to my Belly Button

On Summer days an outie like a flirtatious poutie. My doc snipped just right. Button pops; it’s out of sight. Take a look-see; oops - closed to troops.
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Gauthier Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 1:48 PM
lol ~ cute, Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
November 19, 2025 at 4:18 AM
Glad you thought so! Hugs ~ Kim
Richards Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 10:32 PM
This was a unique topic for the contest - a fun write, Kim. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 5:20 AM
Thank you, Suzette! :)
Jones Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 4:18 PM
Congratulations to you as well!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 5:35 PM
Thank you, Karen!
George Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 4:07 AM
Congratulations Kim on your first place win. I knew this would be a winner.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 10:42 AM
Thank you! I appreciate you, sweet friend!
Poet Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 2:07 AM
Countless exquisite depictions reside within this fantastic poem. Your final lines are so deep. Congratulations on your contest win.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 3:42 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 4:54 PM
So whimsical and succinct. Love that. Original choice of a body part. Congrats.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 3:41 AM
Thank you, Andrea! Fun contest!
Messina Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 3:11 AM
So cute, Kim. I also wrote about my belly button not too long ago, for another contest. Love this! Best wishes in the contest!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 3:41 AM
Thank you, Charles!
Leiser Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 9:43 AM
Cute and funny poem, Kim! Made me smile! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 3:40 AM
Thank you, Laura!
Wolf Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 7:27 PM
No belly button lint (to contemplate) that way, Kim. Alfred E. Newman would be sorely disappointed. lol.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 4:49 AM
LOL!
George Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:00 AM
Love the first two lines. So cool and humorous. Simply sweet. All the best Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:04 AM
Thank you, Valsa! All the best back at ya! ;)
DiMino Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 3:36 AM
Cute. Delightfully playful. Need more of that around here. I will take the lesson.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 4:05 AM
Thank you, Joe! I appreciate your comment!
Hind Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 5:20 PM
Awwww, this is so endearing, what a cute poem, Kim!! <3
Rodrigues Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 6:27 PM
lol…Thanks, Paige!
Rolland Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 3:56 PM
i love the "closed to troops" and smiled, nice poem with nice music, thanks poet Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 6:27 PM
Thank you, Yann!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 3:43 PM
clever and fun read...! :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 6:28 PM
Thank you, Sara! :)
Crandall Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 3:32 PM
haha, funny one!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 6:29 PM
lol…Thank you!
Andresen Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 11:50 AM
- A cute and fun poem, Kim :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 12:31 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! <3
Goldsmith Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 9:04 AM
"An Ode to my Belly Button" is a creative/fun write. Have a fun day/weekend writing away..........
Rodrigues Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 9:56 AM
Thank you, dear one!
Jones Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 7:04 AM
Cute! I too have an outie!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 9:56 AM
Thank you, Karen! ;)
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