An Obituary To My Uncle

(My uncle who has been my father’s younger brother was almost like a father to me. He began his life as a commissioned officer in the Indian Air Force. He married my mother’s sister and is connected to me from both sides)

"I carry your heart with me(I carry it in my heart)I am never without it"  Quote _ by E.E. Cummings

Gone you are, but shall not be forgotten Love you and cherish the values you sowed Through life’s strenuous paths you have trodden With truth and uprightness you were endowed You sired four children, a beautiful brood From a heart of gold doled out love and care You showed the path and your trail they pursued Climbing ladders of success, they did fare Heaped not any wealth, but worked without rest Taught your children to accept life with grace Gave up your pleasures to give them your best You braved your days through life's perplexing maze Uncle, to King eternal, you have fled In our hearts, your loving memories flood Sept.14.2022 Lost to Heaven- My Uncle Writing Challenges- In My Heart- S forms Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 10/8/2022 5:09:00 AM
I am glad to read the second line that he taught you values. It is wonderful to see that there are still some people who do that. Sorry for your loss. Congratulations on this one being on the winners' list. Sara
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Valsa George
Date: 10/8/2022 5:33:00 AM
The older generation was very meticulous in imparting values. Those people are real torch bearers ! As children we always looked upto them. Thanks a lot Sara.. for your great comment.
Date: 10/7/2022 9:31:00 AM
Valsa, nice Sonnet and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - In My Heart - "S" Forms, sorry for your loss, Constance
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Date: 10/8/2022 5:29:00 AM
Thanks a lot Constance for the conduct of many contests
Date: 9/23/2022 1:26:00 PM
A good man is he that is admired in the hearts of others. As your Uncle was, Valsa. A nice tribute poem and good entry for the contest. Good luck! Bill
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Date: 9/15/2022 12:33:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to your uncle Valsa. You have honored him. Linda
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Date: 9/15/2022 11:13:00 AM
Nice one expertly penned Valsa, lovely rhyme and flow too. A lovely tribute to your dear late uncle. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 9/14/2022 6:05:00 PM
Delightful emotions you portray, Valsa. I can clearly notice the familiar tone of beloved recollections. As usual, your writing is excellent. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/14/2022 11:13:00 AM
Lost to Heaven? I thought that is where spirits were found? Like QEII, anyone who can live an entire life with respect is worthy of our remembrance! Nice write, Valsa?
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Date: 10/8/2022 5:25:00 AM
Yes, he lived a life worthy of respect. Thanks a lot Rico
Date: 9/14/2022 8:55:00 AM
Dear Valsa, what a great tribute. And beautiful verse as usual.
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Date: 9/14/2022 9:08:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear Victor. This is what I can do least for him. Unlike you, I am not a seasoned poet.
Date: 9/14/2022 7:07:00 AM
Endearing sentiments you convey, Valsa. I hear the voice of cherished memories. Well written, as always. Best to you.
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Date: 9/14/2022 9:07:00 AM
Memories keep alive those who are gone. Thanks a lot for your sweet appreciation, dear Vijay
Date: 9/14/2022 6:40:00 AM
Wonderful dedication, Valsa, just love 'Life's perplexing maze' Your love and appreciation comes through so strong.
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Date: 9/14/2022 9:06:00 AM
Thank you so much harry.... ! You are an ever encouraging, great man
Date: 9/13/2022 11:30:00 PM
What a special man your uncle was Dear Valsa. Your loving words honor this special man in your life. He is looking down and seeing the love and admiration you have for him in this touching and heartfelt Poetry of yours. God bless you for remembering and sharing these thoughts with us of your uncle...
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Date: 9/14/2022 1:56:00 AM
Thank you so much sweet friend. Indeed he was a man of thorough discipline and one of the best positioned men of the older generation from my family. He lavished love on his dear ones, upheld human values and he still lives in our hearts
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