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An Oak

I have never seen a living thing That looked so very dead-- Lacking elegance and color, Seeming dolorous, instead. And its limbs were much distorted, Like an old, arthritic hand, As it leaned there, hunched and crooked, As if it hurt to stand. But while it had the look of death It bestowed the coolest shade, Leaving me to wonder why... This God so oddly made?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/21/2011 5:47:00 AM
Just reading back through my favourites, might be worth putting this in for 'the tree' contest, it's really good.
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Date: 4/8/2011 5:04:00 AM
Superb - really enjoyed, love the first half of verse 2. think you might have slipped when you selected the poetic form :) That's gone into my favourites - Seven !
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Date: 4/6/2011 9:09:00 PM
Very Good! Brian
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