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An Oak

I have never seen a living thing
That looked so very dead--
Lacking elegance and color,
Seeming dolorous, instead.

And its limbs were much distorted,
Like an old, arthritic hand,
As it leaned there, hunched and crooked,
As if it hurt to stand.

But while it had the look of death
It bestowed the coolest shade,
Leaving me to wonder why...
This God so oddly made?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Bagnall Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 5:47 AM
Just reading back through my favourites, might be worth putting this in for 'the tree' contest, it's really good.
Bagnall Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 5:04 AM
Superb - really enjoyed, love the first half of verse 2. think you might have slipped when you selected the poetic form :) That's gone into my favourites - Seven !
Kilpatrick Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 9:09 PM
Very Good! Brian
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