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Come into the garden of my love, For now, it is high Spring there. My sweet, my darling, my beloved, Let us indulge in our earthly paradise, For it's you I love with all my heart, It's you I cherish above all things. Your beauty dazzles my lonely heart, You are my white unblemished dove That sits upon a sunlit bough. Let me hear your sweet sighs That outshines the thrush's song. You are my one desire, the apex that like A mountain top that shines and dazzles With freshly fallen white snow. You have the power to transform My dreary house from a poor parlor Into an infinite space, a depth of blue That reaches the ends of the galaxy. All walls of my limited space evaporate Trees spring up, blossom heavy and fragrant, Dew drenched and cleaned with Spring's light rains. So do not delay, sweet dove, to bestow Your nectarine kisses on my parched lips That I might, my love appeased, live on.

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Date: 8/8/2021 2:14:00 AM
Beautiful and romantic is your garden of love Victor, where you sit and recall the bliss of your wonderful everlasting love… Belle
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Date: 8/7/2021 9:09:00 PM
Your deep inner soul emotions have poured out in this beautiful verse.
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Date: 8/7/2021 9:02:00 AM
So romantic dear Victor, exquisitely written my friend, I really enjoyed reading it. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 8/6/2021 3:14:00 AM
Quote:All walls of my limited space evaporate. What an absolutely lovely line in a poem full of pleasure...Delice
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Date: 8/6/2021 12:39:00 AM
So beautiful and romantic write dear Victor... Enjoyed reading... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/5/2021 3:38:00 PM
I dipped into your poem like fresh water in the dessert, beautiful and romantic, just the way I love them. thank you Victor :)
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Date: 8/5/2021 2:37:00 PM
Victor, you've written a fantastic poem. Early summer winds carry the alluring smell of young desire, and these seductive phrases of enticement convey that tantalizing fragrance brilliantly.
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Date: 8/5/2021 1:47:00 PM
Romantic!
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Date: 8/5/2021 10:56:00 AM
The breath of delightful spring romance, so fresh and full of joy and wonder, is evoked in these beautiful lines of invitation. Well done! :) Evelyn
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Date: 8/5/2021 8:20:00 AM
WoW! Victor, This is such a beautiful garden of love. I found your write to be engaging and romantic. Thanks for sharing this gem:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/5/2021 5:20:00 AM
Your garden of love is beautifully inviting. Enjoyed the romantic tenor of your poem, Victor.
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Date: 8/5/2021 3:36:00 AM
Beauty captured in your loving lines, Victor:)
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Date: 8/5/2021 1:55:00 AM
- Beautiful and tender, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/5/2021 1:12:00 AM
A spring romance, you write romance so well Victor. Tom
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Date: 8/5/2021 12:08:00 AM
Your love inspires me as always....
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