An Interview With a Skipping Stone

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August- 30- 2025

Re entered in Marathon Mile.No.12. Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Mark Toney



 

“Good Morning! I know you are busy. Will you stop for a while for an interview?”

Sir, what do you want to know? If only you are keen,
And do not look at me with prejudice, I shall explain,
How I ended up here and tell you my whole story_ 
The story of my journey from the cliff to the plane.

“Yes, I know you are a traveller, tell me all about it. But before that, I wish to know about your origin and background.”

I was part of a big rock, so static without motion.
I used to watch birds in flight on feathered wings,
Going from one end to the other, merrily singing,
Buoyed up by the force of the wind as on swings.

Like them I longed to be free and roaming
But knew I was cradling just a fanciful whim.
I slept most of my life with my dream tucked in my heart.
As time rolled by, my dreams and fancies grew dim.

It was then a tremor shook the very face of the earth,
Loosening my mother boulder from her strong hinge.
She moved and rolled down from the great heights,
On the way a chip got broken, in pain I did twinge.

Thus, I was born.  Painfully, alienated from my mother,
I felt so orphaned and lay silent in a dark corner,
Lost and hungering like a dream waiting to wake up.
But my grief gave way to joy, no more I was a mourner.

“It sounds so interesting. How did it all happen? Please tell me…..”

Seeing me lying dejected and despondent, a small stream
Took pity on me and carried me along.
I enjoyed my ride and never more I was sad.
Now to a wider world, joyfully I belong.

Freed from all chains, I am out to view life and enjoy.
I stay in nature’s bosom, free to saunter wherever I wish.
Never feeling the need to pitch my tent, like a gipsy,
I travel along with the stream, with a merry swish.

“So glad to know that your life has taken such an unexpected turn. Now a last question.How do you respond to the popular saying- ‘A Rolling Stone gathers no moss.’”

Sorry, I have nothing to comment. Let men see it that way,
Enjoy life is my creed, my song is the song of liberty.
Leaving all cares and sorrows behind, like a tramp I stroll,
Taking turns and twists, sometimes cascading down in endless novelty.


“Thank you for stopping by to tell the story of your life and sharing your views and aspirations on life”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 8/11/2023 12:20:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your wisdom through this muse of yours. Likewise, belated congratulations for your POTD distinction. God bless you.
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Date: 8/29/2025 11:08:00 PM
Dear Beata, I am seeing your comment only today after months. Thanks a lot for your lovely comment. Sorry for the late response.
Date: 7/29/2023 2:54:00 PM
Congratulations on making the Top 100 New Poems list my dear friend! Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 8/29/2025 11:05:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear Bill. I didn't know that.
Date: 7/6/2023 10:06:00 PM
Your imagination soared like a bird in this lovely, life-affirming write, Valsa. Taking what life deals us and growing in gratitude and grace is a delightful moral to this interview and your narrative and imagery is on fine display. Well done, much enjoyed! Congratulations for the POTD salute ~ John
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Date: 7/6/2023 10:24:00 PM
Hi John, so glad you could find the moral of my poem. We have to be happy with what life offers and wait hopefully for what is yet to come. Your lovely comment is much appreciated. Thanks a lot, dear poet friend
Date: 7/2/2023 9:22:00 PM
Incredible theme using a stone Valsa. Congratulations for this incredible poetry of Yours, and receiving such a high honor of POTD.
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Date: 7/6/2023 10:21:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear Michael ! I feel so delighted by your encouraging words.
Date: 7/1/2023 8:50:00 PM
Glad to see that Poetry Soup did not 'skip' over this one for POTD, Valsa. Well-earned! Peace, Gershon
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Date: 7/2/2023 6:38:00 AM
I love the way you have used the word 'skip' here. Thanks a lot dear Gershon
Date: 7/1/2023 7:42:00 PM
Dear Valsa, we are alike in this way, always embracing the positive that surrounds us; along with the many blessings. Such a beautiful expression of gratitude, through the heart of a stone. We sometimes take for granted simple moments, those close to us and God's grace. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. This is tender and uplifting, all at the same time. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 7/1/2023 8:15:00 PM
Hi Brandy, you always find time to single out the positives in each poet and sincerely try to evaluate their works. I enjoy reading your insightful comments always.... not on my poems alone. You have a sweet word for everyone. Thank you so much. Love and hugs!
Date: 7/1/2023 5:53:00 PM
*****congratulations my friend… you are a unique and a creative Poetess. What is spellbinding story! Enjoy the honors in full! Panagiota
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Date: 7/2/2023 12:18:00 PM
You are most welcome, Valsa. Panagiota
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Date: 7/1/2023 8:09:00 PM
Glad to see the five star rating you have awarded to my poem. I deem it a great honor. Thanks a lot dear Panagie...
Date: 7/1/2023 4:07:00 PM
Lovely … magical ! The journey you describe is so rich and full Valsa ! The tale filled with life lessons, humbleness, courageousness and a beautiful surrender and lust for life ! Congratulations on your POTD dear friend . Hugs and love, Susan :)
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Date: 7/1/2023 8:07:00 PM
Susan, hope you are enjoying your new life. Thanks a lot for your lovely comment.
Date: 7/1/2023 2:57:00 PM
Amazing, once again.. amazing... stopping back to congratulate you for POTD. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/1/2023 8:05:00 PM
Gina, your appreciation matters much to me. Thanks a lot. Stay blessed.
Date: 7/1/2023 2:55:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Valsa, your beautiful poem deserves the honour of POTD - stunning word-choices, picturesque images, and deep thoughts - that's you, My Dear Poetess. Love and best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 7/1/2023 8:04:00 PM
I feel elated by your sweet words. Thanks a lot Mala.
Date: 7/1/2023 1:47:00 PM
I see why this received POTD! It is fascinating. We move along, carefree with this gypsy-skipping stone. Merrily, we roll along..as the song goes. Congratulations, dear one! This one is special!
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Date: 7/1/2023 7:57:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear Kim. Your sweet comment has made me feel special.
Date: 7/1/2023 1:17:00 PM
Great penning Valsa, fully deserved POTD! Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 7/1/2023 7:56:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Gordon
Date: 7/1/2023 12:37:00 PM
Oh, wow, awesome write, Congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/1/2023 7:55:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear Eve. Love and hugs !
Date: 7/1/2023 12:04:00 PM
Back with heartfelt congratulations on the POTD honor, you amply deserve it, dear Valsa. Enjoy your honor
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Date: 7/1/2023 7:54:00 PM
Thank you so much for your steady appreciation ! Happily I glide down in the stream of your kind words like a skipping pebble.
Date: 7/1/2023 11:10:00 AM
Congratulations on a tantalizing POTD Valsa George! Long overdue are your sage poems to be celebrated and accolade! :D
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Date: 7/1/2023 7:52:00 PM
I feel so delighted by your comment and appreciation of my poems, dear Anaya ! Thanks a lot.
Date: 7/1/2023 11:09:00 AM
- I'm sure there were many more stories to tell... an interesting piece, Valsa :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
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Date: 7/1/2023 7:50:00 PM
We poets have no dearth of stories. Thanks a lot dear Anne. Hugs
Date: 7/1/2023 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, what a beautiful story of God's redemption , we all need that living water to provide a way to release from those chains that hold one in death, that one might fly in the realms with the birds in flight, being released from worldly cares and strife : ). God's love is so much beauty to be seen once revealed as through your beautiful gift in writing to encourage, comfort and show all a love the love God has for them is different than the world : )
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Date: 7/1/2023 7:49:00 PM
You have given a divine dimension to my poem. I love your interpretation. The living water that helps one to get released from all chains and sadness. Thanks a lot dear friend Stephan
Date: 7/1/2023 9:15:00 AM
Back to say, Congratulations for your POTD, Valsa. Nice start to July. Enjoy your day of recognition. Bill
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Date: 7/1/2023 9:42:00 AM
I was so happy to see my poem picked up as poem of the day on the 1st of July. Thanks a lot Bill for your congratulations.
Date: 7/1/2023 7:13:00 AM
Hi Vaisa, Enjoyed reading your poem,well worthy to be chosen for poem of the day.
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Date: 7/1/2023 7:24:00 AM
Thanks a lot John for reading my poem and dropping a comment.
Date: 7/1/2023 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a fun/creative write. Have a blessed day/weekend.........
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Date: 7/1/2023 7:23:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear Paula. We poets are blessed with creativity.... you and me alike.
Date: 7/1/2023 6:17:00 AM
Hi Valsa, Wonderfully imaginative perspective in this piece. Congratulations on this well deserved POTD honor.
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Date: 7/1/2023 7:12:00 AM
Nancy, thanks a lot for your sweet words of appreciation.
Date: 7/1/2023 5:03:00 AM
Valsa, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 7/1/2023 7:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Tania.... !
Date: 7/1/2023 4:45:00 AM
Back with 4upBIG congrats on POTD, Valsa. Enjoy your special day today.
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Date: 7/1/2023 7:10:00 AM
Thank you once again Vijay for your Congratulations
Date: 7/1/2023 4:22:00 AM
So very interesting and unique Valsa, congratulations on your POTD honors!!!
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Date: 7/1/2023 7:09:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear Mike. Glad you feel my poem is unique.
Date: 7/1/2023 4:01:00 AM
Very creative!
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Date: 7/1/2023 7:08:00 AM
Thanks a lot Joanna
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