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An Innocent Childhood Memory

Dreams Spun When I was a small girl, I liked to feed bread to drifting ducks, swans and geese; they would twirl ! It was a dance, a magnificent masterpiece; of chance ! Of fun, and dreams of peace; spun ! When I was a small girl, a magnificent masterpiece; spun ! __________________________ August 25, 2020 Poetry/Rhyme/Miinichu/An Innocent Childhood Memory/Dreams Spun Copyright Protected, ID 20 1281-291-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France For the contest, Let's Minichu on an innocent childhood memory sponsor, Mohan Chutani Second Place

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Date: 8/31/2020 9:49:00 AM
Congrats on your win and a beautiful fun childhood activity!!
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Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2020 5:39:00 PM
Krish, thanks so much for the beautiful and the congrats _Constance
Date: 8/31/2020 9:28:00 AM
Constance, feeding the ducks, swans & geese is so thrilling in childhood. Would have placed higher except for the title was totally different. I wanted all titles to be uniform for all. But otherwise a perfect Minichu conveying childhood innocense. Congrats for a near top win. Mohan
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Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2020 5:40:00 PM
Mohan, thank you for an inspiring contest and for my placement, sorry I made that mistake, which I corrected now, but still honored with my win _Constance

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