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An Incomplete Love Story

AN INCOMPLETE LOVE STORY
In the spring fair she went for the wheel ride a bit nervous, bubbling with excitement. A stranger, he gently sat by her side, she eyed him briefly, found his look decent. The wheel turned, on the descent gave sharp jerk, shaken, she clutched his shoulder with her arms. He held her as the wheel stopped at end mark. Thus began a love story full of charms. They knew one can't live without the other. Orthodox social dogma intervened, caste feud shattered their dreams altogether. Incomplete love followed the course ordained. They chose then to lie on the railway track, complete the love elsewhere, they won't come back.
(This is a true story) July 15. 2018

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Date: 7/17/2018 12:41:00 AM
Oh, it's TRUE! This is an incredibly sad story--told movingly in an excellent poem, Subimal! Janice
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/17/2018 2:04:00 AM
Thank you, Janice for your visit. Life can be unkind, sometimes.
Date: 7/15/2018 3:30:00 PM
Goodness! So sad wasn't expecting it to be true. Gave me chills. A sad tragic story well written.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 7/16/2018 2:51:00 AM
Thank you, Susan for your visit.

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