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An Illusion

An Illusion
by Michael R. Burch 
 
The sky was as hushed as the breath of a bee
and the world was bathed in shades of palest gold
when I awoke.
 
She came to me with the sound of falling leaves
and the scent of new-mown grass;
 
I held out my arms to her and she passed
into oblivion ...
 
This little dream-poem appeared in my high school literary journal, the Lantern, so I was no older than 18 when I wrote it, probably younger. I will guess around age 16.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 1/8/2020 6:01:00 AM
It's a great write at any age, but at 16 I would consider it a foreshadowing of your talent. I'll read more from you.
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Michael Burch
Date: 1/8/2020 12:23:00 PM
I like to think I did display some talent at an early age. Thanks so much for reading my poems and taking the time to comment!

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