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The hourglass sat on the mantelpiece, Over a dead fireplace. Its sand had long settled In the lower globe of the glass. The miser and the fire were both dead, The wake followed suit. No one was invited, no eatables or drinks. A dreary affair. Yet so final, Like the hourglass. It's inertia spelled his death. The unpaid solicitor finished his stock taking But kept the hourglass for himself.

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Date: 6/15/2022 1:12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your poem Victor. Thank you.
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Date: 6/11/2022 2:06:00 PM
"An Hourglass" is a wonderful and sad write all in one. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...............
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Date: 6/10/2022 4:14:00 AM
Great poetry here Victor, you certainly come up with some true gems. I think i will also fave it., hugs, blessings, Jennifer,
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Date: 6/8/2022 5:27:00 PM
I LOVE this. Did you say it's an oldie. Gotta fave it.
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Date: 6/8/2022 3:19:00 AM
I wonder if the sand was about to run out for him? I am also wondering if you lost a friend or family member lately that was the miser? Enjoyed reading your work today. Your visits to my page are always inviting. Sara
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Date: 6/8/2022 1:46:00 AM
The hourglass had the final say..Delice
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Date: 6/7/2022 12:10:00 PM
What a precious piece , this beautiful hourglass, that makes us aware of how precious each moment is. Thank you for sharing this meaningful poem
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Date: 6/7/2022 4:44:00 AM
These solicitors are so business like, cut and dry, aren’t they? Business is business.
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Date: 6/7/2022 2:31:00 AM
WoW! Victor, You have penned such a well-written and sad write. Well done, my friend-Alexis
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Date: 6/6/2022 7:29:00 PM
Sad , but interesting. Like Roper's cuckoo clock, if the weights are not pulled it stops working. A profound feeling if it stops his heart stops.. I know it sounds silly. Enjoyed reading friend
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Date: 6/6/2022 6:22:00 PM
Simple, yet profound, Victor:) awesome writing:)
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Date: 6/6/2022 11:23:00 AM
Your excellent poem is powerful and thought provoking, Victor. The connection between the hourglass and and the end of its owner's life was brilliantly portrayed. Evelyn
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Date: 6/6/2022 10:29:00 AM
Intensely deep and this carries a secret explanation of what life is like. A touching write!
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Date: 6/6/2022 5:57:00 AM
Wow! The sadness of the moment. The hourglass is the payment to the solicitor but will he take stock of his own life, will the sands turn again and again or speak quietly of the dead. Fave for me, Victor!
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Date: 6/6/2022 5:43:00 AM
A condition akin to the extinguishing of a life-giving spark. Victor, you tell the truth, even if it hurts. I hope everything is going well for you and that you are now back at home following your hospital visit.
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Date: 6/6/2022 4:55:00 AM
A fitting metaphor for a life-flame extinguished. Sad but true to life, Victor.
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Date: 6/6/2022 1:13:00 AM
A profound and poignant write that can be interpreted in multiple ways ! This indirectly suggests the transience of life... Great poem !
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Date: 6/6/2022 1:09:00 AM
Quite a sombre scene Victor, often you hear of people being found weeks after they have passed, usually people who keep to themselves and have no real contact with anyone. Tom
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