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An Eulogy of Sorts, That, Hopefully, Lends Itself To Daver

Do not vainly look in those remote Places, That, once, were acquainted with a Small part of me; Here I roamed beneath congestion's Of tumultuous cloud; Happy in idle dalliance; still the Clouds gather together listlessly Above the mauve quilts of purple Hills... Lit by that strange half-light that Thinly spills Through the gloaming of twilight's Mesh. For those that stayed... They have long since lowered my Emptied body down. And ponder not, my friends, wherest I might be? And think not that I lie mouldering And irretrievably dead For my dimmed eyes have been Re-opened...and thus I wander Unchecked and free; Though no more to haunt narrowed Seclusion of those twisted and Meandering lanes, Where, accompanied by untidy verges Rich with gaudy coloured Cornflowers... Didst contentedly dawdle alongside Dusted fields of ripening grains. For death, in all truth, is just a Gentle passing through when Everything else is finally done and Said. And do not listen out for me In jostling woods when scrambling up Gentle slopes of shallow vales; Rather, deep inside retreating Bowers, Catch the ever sounding notes of Sweetest liquidity! Soon a sharp tinkling of dropping And yellowing leaves; And, revealed in all their Rudeness, Stripped bare - gaunt trunks of Ancient trees! But the shrunken trees shall so Prevail... As my shrunken soul so too prevails. And think, if only briefly, of what Were the living bones As you arise to early dawns newly Fashioned vibrance and hue; But those tired bones have long Since atoned! Or, perhaps, when you retire at the End of each finished day You could enrich my memory in some Fond, albeit unimportant, enduring, And a gradual slow-smiling sort of Way. For what is left is nothing but mere Residual... As if a finely carpeted sprinkling of Glistening, summer dew. But that immortal residual has Now become part of the living Currents eternal stream; No longer held within thin bloods Coursing grey veins; At odd times, I would hope, A sudden flashing recollection, a Diminished image of a blithe spirit That compels upon you...as does A momentarily sparkling glimmer Ignited by the brighest glint of a Fleeting gleam! Then let them say only this of me, That, indeed, for him, this is a Most fitting eulogy. For I should wish of all there ever Was...at least this much so Remains. Rest in peace, Daver. Your respectful friend Through words. john

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Date: 4/11/2018 3:46:00 PM
I didn't know :(( John I just came by to say hello. I actually left a comment on his page today. I didn't know :((
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John Fleming
Date: 6/17/2018 4:22:00 PM
Hello, FJ. Thank you very much for the visit and the nice comment; please accept my apologies for the late reply...I have been rather remiss in my Soup obligations of late. My warmest regards! :) john
Date: 1/18/2018 9:01:00 PM
It was sad to hear the news of Daver's passing. He was such a kind, gentle and genuine individual whose presence is going to be missed here on Poetry Soup... This is a beautiful tribute for him, John, and may our good memories of Daver live on!
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Date: 1/22/2018 1:54:00 AM
Thank you, Kelly. I cannot claim to have been a friend of Daver's but I know he was a gentle soul and much admired here on the "Soup"; the tribute is as much an acknowledgement to the love and loyalty of his close friends as it is to Daver himself...I hope he would approve? My very warmest regards, Kelly. :) john
Date: 1/8/2018 4:54:00 AM
This brings me tears John. This is flawless, immaculately written. I always come to your page excited and leave it in awe. He will be remembered... "For death, in all truth, is just a Gentle passing through when Everything else is finally done and Said." Pure brilliance. It gives me chills. Always, Laura
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Date: 1/10/2018 7:10:00 AM
Thank you, Laura...your comments have touched my heart. :) john
Date: 1/7/2018 8:18:00 AM
Thanks for the welcome to your corner of the soup. This is worthy of being read several times.
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Date: 1/8/2018 3:13:00 AM
And thank you, Richard! Your kind comments are always well received here - much appreciated! My very warmest regards. :) john
Date: 1/2/2018 1:57:00 AM
Thank you, Rhoda...you are very kind. My very best regards! :) john
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Date: 1/1/2018 6:16:00 PM
I did not know Daver, but I can believe that this beautiful write soothes those he left behind. You have immortalized him through poetry and that is such a great gift to him, his family, and his friends. Very kind of you.
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Date: 1/2/2018 1:58:00 AM
Thank you, Rhoda...you are very kind. My very best regards! :) john
Date: 12/28/2017 7:11:00 AM
Lovely words John. You mix nature and spiritualism seamlessly. Beautiful Eulogy.
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Date: 12/31/2017 3:04:00 PM
Hello, Scott...always good to see you turning up my friend. Thank you for the lovely comments - none nicer! My very best regards for your New Year - Cheers!! :) john
Date: 12/25/2017 3:09:00 PM
John, I came to find a new poem and did not find one, but I found the reply you made to my comment on this one a while back. Thanks so much for what you said. I do not know if Daver's widow is even reading or seeing his poems and the comments left to him but I sure hope she tried to do it. Have a beautiful Christmas day and blessed New Year.
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Date: 12/31/2017 3:07:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea...and a blessed New Year to you and your own also. My very best regards - Cheers!! :) john
Date: 12/11/2017 9:57:00 AM
I'm overwhelmed by reading this truly amazing tribute. What a beautiful eulogy. Hope you are well, John. Hugs
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Date: 12/25/2017 1:51:00 AM
Hello, Becca. Always so very nice when you turn up -- no one is more welcome! :) I hope your Christmas is a cheerful and happy one...as indeed it ought to be. My very warmest wishes, Becca - Merry Christmas!! :) john
Date: 11/29/2017 6:28:00 PM
Hello John I have enjoyed this eulogy you have written. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 12/25/2017 1:47:00 AM
Hello, Darlene. Sorry for not replying earlier...I am a postie and at this time of year it is complete chaos! Many thanks - have a very merry Christmas! :) john
Date: 11/27/2017 1:55:00 AM
A fine eulogy, John. well written. Regards, Viv
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Date: 12/25/2017 1:43:00 AM
Always nice to see you turning up, Viv - A very merry Christmas toy you all! :) john
Date: 11/24/2017 9:03:00 PM
Beautiful tribute, John.
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Date: 12/25/2017 1:42:00 AM
Hello, Line. Many thanks for taking the time to comment...always appreciated by me. Have a very merry Christmas! :) john
Date: 11/18/2017 8:35:00 AM
This is moving and gorgeously written. Very nicely done indeed.
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Date: 12/25/2017 1:36:00 AM
Thank you, Dale...and nice to become acquainted - a very merry Christmas to you! :) john
Date: 11/15/2017 4:39:00 PM
John, I am moved by your beautiful tribute to Daver. I did not have the pleasure of knowing him but from reading all the comments he was obviously respected and loved by all his fellow poets. My heart goes out to all. John
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Date: 11/16/2017 4:01:00 AM
Hello, John. Allow me to remark that it is a pleasure to become acquainted - nice to know you! Thank you for the visit and for leaving such generous and kind comments...it is always very much appreciated by me. My very best regards, John. :) john
Date: 11/15/2017 3:38:00 PM
wonderful tribute john, Daver would have loved this, he was such a dear friend to us all...
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Date: 11/16/2017 3:52:00 AM
Nice to see you again, Harry -- as always! I am very pleased you approve of the poem...it was composed with Daver's loyal and loving friends in mind. My very warmest regards to you, Harry. :) john
Date: 11/15/2017 3:12:00 PM
This speaks volumes John...I am enamored ...Dave was a gentle and loving friend to all
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Date: 11/16/2017 3:50:00 AM
Thank you, Tim, for taking time to visit...and thank you for your kind comments it is very decent of you. My very best regards! :) john
Date: 11/14/2017 12:48:00 PM
A very lovely tribute to a friend. So so beautiful! Hugs :)
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Date: 11/15/2017 3:08:00 AM
Hello, Akkina. Always nice for me to see you visiting once again...you are most welcome here - at anytime! Many thanks...and thank you for your lovely comments. My very warmest regards! :) john
Date: 11/13/2017 4:53:00 PM
I am touched by this lovely tribute to Dave. We shared and commented on our respective poems; he was talented...his music and writing abilities are proof of that. Thank you for sharing this with us. Regards // paul
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Date: 11/14/2017 3:11:00 AM
Hi, Paul. I have to say in all truthfulness that I was not a friend of Daver...we knew each other by the comments we shared on our respective poetry. However, upon his death I began to realize just what high esteem his close friends held this man in; the poem is not just a tribute to Daver, but to his many loyal and loving friends...for what is true friendship without loyalty? My warmest regards, Paul. :) john P.s Many thanks, Paul!
Date: 11/12/2017 8:11:00 PM
Great tribute, John, friends are so dear when you're like brothers or sisters. Hugs Eve ,
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Date: 11/14/2017 3:06:00 AM
Hello, Eve. Not seen you in a while; I hope you are keeping well...and life is treating you kindly. Thank you for your taking the time to visit, and for leaving such nice comments -- always very much appreciated by me! My warmest regards, Eve. :) john
Date: 11/9/2017 10:56:00 AM
This is lovely, John! So much to think about here. Death and life seem to merge as indeed they should. Such a beautiful tribute My Very Best to you, Kathy
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Date: 11/10/2017 7:38:00 AM
Hello, Kathy - What a nice surprise! Always a pleasure for me to see you have called in, here, at my little corner of the "Soup"...you know of course you are most welcome. Thank you for your kind remarks - much appreciated! Good to see you again, Kathy! My very warmest regards. Your friend. :) john
Date: 11/8/2017 5:43:00 AM
Superb write my friend...a beautiful tribute to a friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 11/8/2017 6:18:00 AM
Good to see you again, W.W...you are always most welcome here. Many thanks for your kind and generous comments; I am pleased you think so highly of the poem. My warmest regards as always, W.W - and my very best wishes! :) john
Date: 11/6/2017 10:38:00 AM
Daver was an "elder statesman" role model for this old-guy-in-training. You have said it beyond extremely well so I'll add no more, other to admit I've read this three times and only now hesitantly place my meager crumbs of words beneath such a masterpiece. Awestruck ~ john too
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Date: 11/7/2017 8:53:00 AM
Hello, l.f Your kind and generous words are very humbling...thank you, my friend. I am proud that you think so highly of this poem, and honoured that you, as a personal friend of Daver's, should give it such a resounding endorsement -- I am eternally grateful! My very warmest regards, l.f :) john
Date: 11/6/2017 6:06:00 AM
A simply great tribute to a friend, John, though I never knew Daver personally, I'm sure he was a great person, by your words :) congratulations on POTD:)
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Date: 11/6/2017 12:35:00 PM
Thank you, Jo, for taking the time to visit my poem and leave such nice comments...it is always much appreciated! My very best wishes, Jo! :) john
Date: 11/6/2017 2:08:00 AM
John, I want you to do my eulogy.... what a beautiful painting of thoughts....
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 12/26/2017 2:47:00 PM
Thanks my friend for good wishes and happy thoughts, as I said not only I celebrate Christmas, I celebrate Hanukkah, Yalda, Kwanzaa these days. Merry Christmas and happy new year.....
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Date: 11/6/2017 12:31:00 PM
Thank you, Pashang, for such a wonderful comment...I am very touched; although I would most fervently hope it is a long, long time before you would need an eulogy, my friend. My very warmest regards, Pashang. :) john
Date: 11/5/2017 2:40:00 PM
Daver would be so honored by this lovely tribute John. I miss him and knew him well. This is a most beautiful tribute! Congratulations on having it honored with POTD! I had t o fave this gem! : )
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Date: 11/5/2017 5:39:00 PM
Hello, Connie. Always a pleasure for me when I see you have called around once again; and thank you for the lovely comments you have accorded me...that it is most kind of you. I cannot say Daver was a friend of mine, I knew him through his comments on my poetry, but I believed him to be a decent man. The poem is a tribute not just to Daver but to the love and loyalty of his friends -- for what is friendship without loyalty? My very warmest regards, Connie - as always! :) john
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