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An Epic Battle

Far and away, I sat upon those ethereal
elusive, rocky cliffs, at the edge of eternity.
Upon observing the scene before me, I could see
dark wretched towers with rigid spikes, jutting 
toward the heavens, underneath a tempestuous sky.  

From it's devilish heights, this ominous castle
of darkness loomed, a large monstrosity, as it's
reckless shadows tried in vain to overtake
it's nemesis. For under it, I beheld a smaller castle
that shone like a beacon in it's golden gleam
a priceless jewel in it's resplendent brilliance. 

These dwellings stood; two great, diabolical
forces, emanating from the universe
waging an eternal battle, warring between
the powers of light and darkness, good and evil.

A great beam of light from the heavens shone
upon the smaller castle, it's pure rays bathed
in glory, while black and brooding clouds 
surrounded it, like menacing storms of vengeance.
Yet the darkness can never overtake the light.

Below this great war of conflict and adversity
lay desolate and barren lowlands, stark and lifeless.
It's suffocating stillness is devoid of hope or comfort.
No living being would ever desire to be mercilessly
abandoned to that hellish existence alone.

While staring in quiet, chilling contemplation
I began to understand more of the meaning
of this supernatural event. For it became
clear to me that I was witnessing
a grand sight of epic proportions.

Even though I could not see those that
battled together within this realm, I was aware
that the conflict was between the angelic
hosts above and the demonic forces below.

As  I began to discern these things
behold, a Holy Light blinded my eyes.
And falling down, I beheld the One
who sits upon the Throne above.

Then His Voice came flowing forth, like the
voice of many thunderous waters, saying
"I will Overcome." And afterwards, I went 
away rejoicing, filled with inexpressible peace.






Written on 11/14/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/20/2016 7:53:00 PM
LOL, I was attracted by this title. It was a wonderful win in my contest. I love EPIC poems... Laura, the ending was the icing of it all..... LINDA
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/20/2016 9:09:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. I appreciate your kind words :)
Date: 12/5/2015 4:13:00 AM
Wonderful poem n win Laura.. big congrats!!
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:54:00 PM
Hi Laura, Congrats on your "Epic Sighting" Love SKAT
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:22:00 PM
Laura, thank you for supporting my contest "Epic Sighting." Stop by my latest blog --Abandon-- if you'd like. Have a nice day. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/22/2015 6:36:00 PM
LOVE THIS EPIC MY FRIEND. That battle has already been fought and won! We , as fallen beings, live in the past and that past is our current reality. His Son fought it and won --with his victory came our Salvation, if we but choose and repent. A7
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Date: 11/15/2015 8:40:00 PM
Beautiful and might I say "epic" and when I read this, my first thought was revelations!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/15/2015 10:28:00 PM
That's kind of the tone I was after, referring to Revelations, of course!
Date: 11/15/2015 4:02:00 PM
Amen. What a beautiful write has flown to us from your heart, Laura. Amen.....And we are more than conquerors in Him who loved us. Beautiful entry to the contest. I'm here to thank you for your support on my blog. It warmed my heart.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/15/2015 5:38:00 PM
Thank you, dear Eileen, for your kind and supportive words! I tried to write it like I was seeing a vision like in Revelations. Take care and God bless you always :)
Date: 11/15/2015 1:28:00 PM
- A great poem, particularly like the last verse Laura - Get well soon, hope you are much better tomorrow :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/15/2015 3:22:00 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise! That is so very kind of you and I'm glad you liked my poem, too :)
Date: 11/14/2015 4:53:00 PM
In light of recent events this epic piece puts things into perspective. Thankfuly God will overcome all obstacles.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/14/2015 5:23:00 PM
Yes, I agree, Richard. I'm very saddened by what has occurred in Paris, and have been keeping the people and the victims' families in my prayers.

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