An Epic Battle

Far and away, I sat upon those ethereal
elusive, rocky cliffs, at the edge of eternity.
Upon observing the scene before me, I could see
dark wretched towers with rigid spikes, jutting 
toward the heavens; underneath, a tempestuous sky.  

From devilish heights, an ominous castle
of darkness loomed, a large monstrosity
Reckless shadows tried in vain to overtake
its nemesis. Under it, I beheld a smaller castle
that shone like a beacon in its golden gleam
a priceless jewel in resplendent brilliance. 

Here, these dwellings stood; two great, diabolical
forces, emanating from the universe
waging an eternal battle, warring between
the powers of light and darkness, of good and evil.

A great beam of light from the heavens shone
upon the smaller castle, its pure rays bathed
in glory, while black and brooding clouds 
surrounded it, like menacing storms of vengeance.
Yet the darkness could never overtake the light.

Below this great war of conflict and adversity
lay desolate and barren lowlands, stark and lifeless.
Its suffocating stillness was devoid of hope or comfort.
No living being would ever desire to be mercilessly
abandoned to its hellish existence alone.

While watching in quiet, chilling contemplation
I began to understand more of the meaning
of this supernatural event. For it became
clear to me that I was witnessing
a grand sight of epic proportions.

Even though I could not see those that
battled within this realm, I was aware
that the conflict was between the angelic
hosts above and the demonic forces below.

As I began to discern these things
behold, a Holy Light blinded my eyes.
And falling down, I briefly beheld the One
who sits upon the Throne above.

Then, His Voice came flowing forth, like the
voice of many thunderous waters, saying,
"I will Overcome." And afterwards, I went 
away rejoicing, filled with inexpressible peace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 20, 2016 at 7:53 PM
LOL, I was attracted by this title. It was a wonderful win in my contest. I love EPIC poems... Laura, the ending was the icing of it all..... LINDA
Leiser Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 9:09 PM
Thank you, Linda. I appreciate your kind words :)
A. Sharma Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 4:13 AM
Wonderful poem n win Laura.. big congrats!!
A  Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 11:54 PM
Hi Laura, Congrats on your "Epic Sighting" Love SKAT
A   Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 11:22 PM
Laura, thank you for supporting my contest "Epic Sighting." Stop by my latest blog --Abandon-- if you'd like. Have a nice day. Love ~LINDA~
Lindley Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 6:36 PM
LOVE THIS EPIC MY FRIEND. That battle has already been fought and won! We , as fallen beings, live in the past and that past is our current reality. His Son fought it and won --with his victory came our Salvation, if we but choose and repent. A7
Vaso Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 8:40 PM
Beautiful and might I say "epic" and when I read this, my first thought was revelations!
Leiser Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 10:28 PM
That's kind of the tone I was after, referring to Revelations, of course!
Manassian Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 4:02 PM
Amen. What a beautiful write has flown to us from your heart, Laura. Amen.....And we are more than conquerors in Him who loved us. Beautiful entry to the contest. I'm here to thank you for your support on my blog. It warmed my heart.
Leiser Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 5:38 PM
Thank you, dear Eileen, for your kind and supportive words! I tried to write it like I was seeing a vision like in Revelations. Take care and God bless you always :)
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 1:28 PM
- A great poem, particularly like the last verse Laura - Get well soon, hope you are much better tomorrow :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
November 15, 2015 at 3:22 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise! That is so very kind of you and I'm glad you liked my poem, too :)
Lamoureux Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 4:53 PM
In light of recent events this epic piece puts things into perspective. Thankfuly God will overcome all obstacles.
Leiser Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 5:23 PM
Yes, I agree, Richard. I'm very saddened by what has occurred in Paris, and have been keeping the people and the victims' families in my prayers.
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