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An Endless Bond

Our souls begin to intertwine Now my heart is forever yours And yours forever mine As our endless love matures Through all of this life's little detours We continue to conquer the bad And wholeheartedly cherish the good Knowing the other will be there if one is sad Our feelings will never be misunderstood This love is what supports our livelihood This spiritual bond stays strong Reassuring our love will never end I'll pray that time will always prolong My soulmate who at first was just my friend Now when it does end together we'll transcend 6/28/2017

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/2/2018 7:40:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Jeremy. Well done.

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/1/2018 5:54:00 PM

A beautiful and soulful write of deep emotion Jeremy.. Congratulations on your wonderful win with your excellent poem..

Eve Roper

Date: 2/28/2018 6:10:00 PM

Nicely done, Jeremy, congratulations on your win.

Lu Loo

Date: 2/28/2018 11:09:00 AM

perfect rhythm and rhyme Jeremy, loved every word. thank you and congratulations on your placement :) -luloo

Alona Perlin

Date: 7/7/2017 1:01:00 PM

Beautiful and soulful. Well deserved win!

Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/7/2017 1:03:00 PM

Thanks so much Alona :)

Curtis Johnson

Date: 7/4/2017 12:10:00 PM

Very inspiring. Congrats on your win my friend

Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/4/2017 12:25:00 PM

Thanks Curtis for this great comment :)

John Hamilton

Date: 7/4/2017 10:19:00 AM

Congrats Jeremy on a great win with an excellent poem, really showcases your talent!

Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/4/2017 12:24:00 PM

Thank you, John :) I really appreciate your views and comments!!

White Wolf

Date: 7/4/2017 8:46:00 AM

Congrats, my friend! Really well done, Jeremy! The new shining star of the soup!

Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/4/2017 12:23:00 PM

Thanks, friend ;) I wish though!!

Constance La France

Date: 7/2/2017 8:33:00 PM

Jeremy this is beautifully penned, I had this with my husband, our hearts and souls were forever entwined, even death cannot break our connection. Keep up the excellent writing.

Jeremy Smith
Date: 7/2/2017 8:35:00 PM

Thank you :) Love can be truly amazing when it's shared!!

Funom Makama

Date: 6/30/2017 9:43:00 AM

This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.

Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/30/2017 10:18:00 AM

Thank you, Funom please come to my page anytime you want :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/29/2017 5:12:00 PM

Yes, this is very beautiful, Jeremy:)

Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/29/2017 5:14:00 PM

Thank you Daniel :)

John Hamilton

Date: 6/29/2017 8:54:00 AM

Very beautiful Jeremy, I like the use of 5 lines in each stanza, nice rhymes as well, also very meaningful, relationships should be like this, threefold cord. Differing syllable counts do not affect flow at all, so nicely done. Wow, you are really improving quickly!

Jeremy Smith
Date: 6/29/2017 11:25:00 AM

Thank you so much, John, I'm very determined :) but seriously you, White Wolf and Darren White have been a huge help in such a short time!!