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An Endless Bond

Our souls begin to intertwine
Now my heart is forever yours
And yours forever mine
As our endless love matures
Through all of this life's little detours

We continue to conquer the bad
And wholeheartedly cherish the good
Knowing the other will be there if one is sad
Our feelings will never be misunderstood
This love is what supports our livelihood

This spiritual bond stays strong
Reassuring our love will never end
I'll pray that time will always prolong
My soulmate who at first was just my friend
Now when it does end together we'll transcend

6/28/2017

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Line Gauthier Date: 3/2/2018 7:40:00 PM Congrats on your win, Jeremy. Well done. Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 3/1/2018 5:54:00 PM A beautiful and soulful write of deep emotion Jeremy.. Congratulations on your wonderful win with your excellent poem.. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 2/28/2018 6:10:00 PM Nicely done, Jeremy, congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 2/28/2018 11:09:00 AM perfect rhythm and rhyme Jeremy, loved every word. thank you and congratulations on your placement :) -luloo Login to Reply

Alona Perlin Date: 7/7/2017 1:01:00 PM Beautiful and soulful. Well deserved win! Login to Reply Jeremy Smith Date: 7/7/2017 1:03:00 PM Thanks so much Alona :)

Curtis Johnson Date: 7/4/2017 12:10:00 PM Very inspiring. Congrats on your win my friend Login to Reply Jeremy Smith Date: 7/4/2017 12:25:00 PM Thanks Curtis for this great comment :)

John Hamilton Date: 7/4/2017 10:19:00 AM Congrats Jeremy on a great win with an excellent poem, really showcases your talent! Login to Reply Jeremy Smith Date: 7/4/2017 12:24:00 PM Thank you, John :) I really appreciate your views and comments!!

White Wolf Date: 7/4/2017 8:46:00 AM Congrats, my friend! Really well done, Jeremy! The new shining star of the soup! Login to Reply Jeremy Smith Date: 7/4/2017 12:23:00 PM Thanks, friend ;) I wish though!!

Constance La France Date: 7/2/2017 8:33:00 PM Jeremy this is beautifully penned, I had this with my husband, our hearts and souls were forever entwined, even death cannot break our connection. Keep up the excellent writing. Login to Reply Jeremy Smith Date: 7/2/2017 8:35:00 PM Thank you :) Love can be truly amazing when it's shared!!

Funom Makama Date: 6/30/2017 9:43:00 AM This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share. Login to Reply Jeremy Smith Date: 6/30/2017 10:18:00 AM Thank you, Funom please come to my page anytime you want :)

Daniel Turner Date: 6/29/2017 5:12:00 PM Yes, this is very beautiful, Jeremy:) Login to Reply Jeremy Smith Date: 6/29/2017 5:14:00 PM Thank you Daniel :)

John Hamilton Date: 6/29/2017 8:54:00 AM Very beautiful Jeremy, I like the use of 5 lines in each stanza, nice rhymes as well, also very meaningful, relationships should be like this, threefold cord. Differing syllable counts do not affect flow at all, so nicely done. Wow, you are really improving quickly! Login to Reply Jeremy Smith Date: 6/29/2017 11:25:00 AM Thank you so much, John, I'm very determined :) but seriously you, White Wolf and Darren White have been a huge help in such a short time!!