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An Away Crush

An Away Crush A love Far away I’m above In sway Thinking about A new crush In a bout I”m now in a rush To go see them To be with And win my gem Though i might be lithe I know I can’t get The person I am on set Written on January 17, 2020

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Miranda Hawley

Date: 2/11/2020 1:10:00 PM

Good

Dylan Ravenclaw
Date: 2/11/2020 4:54:00 PM

I appreciate that you like it! What is your interpretation of the poem? It's just that in my poems, I kind of cloud what is actually happening, so it looks nice and happy. Generally they have darker and sadder things in them. That's why I like to hear others' interpretations of them. i would like to hear what you thought happened and what it was about. Thank you for reading!