An Arrogant Person

Embittered with envy and evil intent,
he knew what he was but did not care.
His god was his ego, his fight unfair,
no holds barred. He stole, he lied,
he never prayed. He thought he was great.

He had no friends, not even his wife.
His children hated him, now long dispersed
much to his wife's agony. Evil excited him.
He never shook hands or waved a greeting.
But money spells power, and many were afraid
to be on the wrong side of his good books.

So he received no love and no respect.
And when he died, no bells tolled their dirge,
no eulogy was read during his cremation;
all were glad, especially his wife
who was now rich and glad.
And on his tombstone, she had engraved:
"A closed hand cannot receive."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Edmonds  Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 11:40 PM
It’s true what they say Victor, it’s better to give than to receive. A great write… Beryl ✍️
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 5:36 PM
powerful message. I agree, especially with the ending.
Sharma  Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 9:40 PM
"a closed hand cannot receive" sigh, yes ~ absolutely. You've so well summarised the whole essence there ... so heart-moving and filled with depth, the one who doesn't know how to give cannot receive either. It is rightly said that respect is something that cannot be forcefully gained, rather earned. And what can be achieved with power is fear. Your words are always so profound and this one made me think deeper, sigh! Pleasure reading always, dear Victor. Sending you light and best wishes ~
Anaya Avatar
July 26, 2026 at 6:33 AM
Make merits, not sin. No namaste` for the embittered with envy and evil intent, poignant, Victor. Blessings
Hind Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 10:23 PM
wow, that's terrible, imagine that on your grave
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 3:56 PM
Hello Victor, I like the last verse. Enjoy your evening my my friend. /Darlene/
DiMino Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 11:32 AM
The lack of love he put out in life, was his epitaph. Not easy to erase that which is written in stone.
Smith  Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 12:58 AM
Karma always wins in the end.
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 9:06 PM
Very interesting read! The last line is my favorite :-) Have a nice day!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 5:49 PM
Poignant at the end! Don’t be warning, instead be a blessing! Great write, dear friend!
Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 4:38 PM
Wow. You got that description down pat!
Poet Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 11:14 AM
Impressive work, Victor. That kind of tormented spirit is not uncommon; I have met a couple of them. Perfect conclusion.
Buehler Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 9:53 AM
An interesting and insightful story. People like that are their own worst enemy. Great writing!
Devi Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 7:31 AM
Such personalities make other's lives miserable.Indeed we come accross such persons in our lives.Very well done
Jones Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 7:04 AM
Wow! Very challenged character you wrote so well of. I’m curious what inspired this write? Is it for contest? Great job regardless!
Cunningham Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 5:46 AM
Sadly there are many like that in our societies, people like that are best avoided. Tom
Sands Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 5:42 AM
Sad and well written Victor :)
Kendrick Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 5:28 AM
Sad that a person lived a life not loved, Victor, but even sadder in that he brought it on himself. Since this is not the first one I have seen with this theme, it must be for a contest which when I read it seems like a good contender for a contest to me. Way to go. Sara K.
Kitchin Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 3:19 AM
Victor, wonderfully penned. I have met a few troubled souls like that in the past. A great ending.
Andresen Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 1:35 AM
- A person you don't want to be friends with - So agree with the last line, Victor - Great writing :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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