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My strength weakens, I stroll the cold shore To find a peaceful place to lay my head A restful sleep to awake to no more Upon shadows floating over my bed Beckoning me to follow with tears shed Sweet-scented roses and poses content A brief thought, is this my sister, descent With lament and turning it into hope So long I’ve grieved to just spend a moment With an Angel I so adore to cope
9/7/2016 Dizain Poem II - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Laura Loo One new dizain poem on any theme you wish Ten lines of 10 syllables each line rhyme scheme: A-B-A-B-B-C-C-D-C-D

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Date: 9/13/2016 10:20:00 AM
Your Dizain poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Date: 9/12/2016 5:13:00 PM
This is beautiful good luck in the contest
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Date: 9/11/2016 3:56:00 PM
Eve, beautifully penned and with such sadness, I have angels too...congratulations ~
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Date: 9/11/2016 1:20:00 PM
A lovely, ethereal dizain Eve. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/11/2016 10:41:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Eve:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/11/2016 9:33:00 AM
Oh lovely Eve, I wasn't sure if you were referring to my sister in this poem but that is exactly how I read it. It touched me deeply and at the same time gave me smiles on my face...congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/11/2016 12:33:00 PM
I had a feeling...thank you so much :)-luloo
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/11/2016 12:28:00 PM
Yes it was meant for you and your sister, thank you so much the placement. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/9/2016 9:00:00 PM
Very moving, touching, beautiful poem, Eve!
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Date: 9/9/2016 3:54:00 AM
A very moving piece Eve. Best of luck in the contest. ; )
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Date: 9/9/2016 2:50:00 AM
So deep and beautiful...Good luck in the contest....
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Date: 9/8/2016 1:32:00 PM
Beautiful and touching Eve. A pleasure to read. Glad to be back. (hopefully 50 percent this time) From Houston Texas *Linda
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Date: 9/8/2016 12:16:00 PM
Eve - this is beauty in words and touches me as only a poem of soaring emotion can ... CayCay
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Date: 9/8/2016 6:45:00 AM
Touchingly lovely ...
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Date: 9/8/2016 3:38:00 AM
Lovely write Eve.. // hugs and blessings
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Date: 9/8/2016 2:04:00 AM
oh so sad and movingEve good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/8/2016 1:07:00 AM
Very moving poem, Eve:) just what Laura is looking for:) this is sure to win:)
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Date: 9/8/2016 12:53:00 AM
- Eve, a deeply moving and beautiful poem - Good luck in the contest - Hugs and a 7 // Anne-Lise :)
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