Amour


tender touch ignites
burning embers of desire
intoxicating
 hearts eternally on fire
locked in each others embrace

6/21/13

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Jack Horne

Date: 6/29/2013 3:22:00 PM

beautiful, my friend. Love it. Hope you are finally over that nasty flu and enjoying the weekend x

Skat A

Date: 6/28/2013 10:23:00 PM

Hello Phyllis, a lovely embracing hold. a tender poem, exquisite and on fire. I am talking about the forever passion. If this is the love you are sharing, up to this day. then you must share your secret. Enjoyed ~SKAT~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2013 1:19:00 AM

Hey, sweetie. that was a surprise having you leave me so many comments. Thanks so much, and please get some more of your own poems up for me to see. I swear I've seen every poem you ever wrote. Maybe I should see them all over again!! How are you doing this week? I had an extremely stressful one and can finally unwind and play catch up. boy do I have a lot of catching up to do and it's after 1!!

Christine Phillips

Date: 6/27/2013 10:19:00 AM

"hearts eternally on fire" beautiful line, beautiful poem...you have stolen the show.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/27/2013 2:58:00 AM

love your words ;}

Shiraz Iqbal

Date: 6/27/2013 2:29:00 AM

Perfect selection of words . . . . . This one is gem.Congrats on ur win :-)

April Gabriella

Date: 6/26/2013 5:02:00 PM

Very nice. :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/26/2013 2:11:00 PM

very romantic! Light & Love ;)

Elaine George

Date: 6/23/2013 6:43:00 PM

A agreat love Tanka, Phyllis. Many congrats on your win. Elaine George

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2013 12:07:00 AM

oh gosh, you have up a poem that I didn't see yet. well, I am seeing it now and I am very pleased to see you on the winners' list of this fun contest. Congrats, Phyllis. How are you?