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Giddy

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It’s a dreary rainy day for everyone but she Her heart overflows with joyful sunshine An effervescence she cannot contain She glows with giddy infatuation The way she saunters on rainbow clouds Thirsting hungering craving All while bursting at the seams Impossible to hide her exhilaration Caught in a whirlwind of disarray Undeniable the power he has over her Her justifiably warranted adulation An intensity that refuses to subside Its sorcery exquisite and sublime AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on March 5, 2019 for contest FREE VERSE ON LOVE- 10 WORDS sponsored by LU LOO

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Date: 2/5/2019 4:20:00 PM
Very well penned; it should do well in the contest, good luck.
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Date: 2/5/2019 9:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, ML. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/5/2019 1:41:00 PM
I wish I was the Judge it would be 1st place for sure, GREAT JOB, my friend
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Date: 2/5/2019 1:44:00 PM
Thank you, Bobby. You make me feel like a winner already.
Date: 2/5/2019 10:22:00 AM
The first line captured me and held me in arms of pure delight; the rest of the poem also, Line.
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Date: 2/5/2019 1:48:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit, Caren.
Date: 2/5/2019 10:05:00 AM
Oh Lu Loo's going to love this! I do :))) Good luck in the contest! xomo
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Date: 2/5/2019 1:49:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Maureen.

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